The moon did not rise one night, and there are strange things going on in Canterlot. Discord, Chrysalis, and even Trixie shows up in this story. Pay attention for other cameos! This story was written as a result of a challenge. She told me to write a MLP story without a storyboard, in one take. No going back to edit what was written later on, and to wing the story as I go. I think it turned out rather well. Equestria Daily's request for a bat-pony story shaped this story as well.
While you've got a long way to go as a writer, I feel like you've got some potential. So keep reading, keep writing, and don't give up. :)
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This was a speed write. I wasn't allowed to go back and fix anything, also couldn't do up a storyboard. Just all on the fly. My normal stuff is better. Thanks for the feedback!