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whoa... I wish I could do this kind of thing in Fallout more regularly... oh and they are hoofballs, not foot. Ponies don't have feet. That would be really weird
3439674 Technically speaking hooves are feet, even snails have feet albeit just the one, it's just a general term but yes hoof does sound better.
Btw good chapter, loving Atom's morality, she's a lot of fun.
This is everything I wanted from my story on a much more extreme scale. 10/10 will advertise for you later.
...so would mini Balefire bombs count as improvised footballs?
How does Extreme Frisbee compare to Ultimate Frisbee?
Come on, Sandy, don't you think Atom could stand to learn a thing or two? It's a shame you gave her a weapon.
Maybe you should have thought of that before you shot them.
Well, there's always next time.
That . . . was the least threatening use of that quote I have ever heard.
Always a good thing to do mid-battle.
I'm not sure you understand this surviving thing.
I don't know why those things were ever in style.
Thank you, Atom. I'm glad you're here to educate me.
I cannot tell what level of insanity this is. This worries me a little.
I think I'll stick with Ultimate.
Atom, you're really a walking argument for banning violent video games.
What about when you're using American footballs? I bet it cuts your critical chance in half.
Gotta love Clint, Dirty Harry is a great film.
6196774 football insanity, its an English thing.
Glad I found this story A+++
Matrix and Pulp Fiction references from a at least 19 year old that acts more like a 9 year old doped up on sugar and the hardest hardcore grimdark upbringing that I have seen since forever… yea nope, not really for me. The first chapter was amazing, you could really feel the freedom of getting out of the stable, the mischief bubbling in our main character, and was generally a great laugh. This chapter thou? Taking it a bit too far and feels more like we are following a P&P character played by a very goofy person and satire than anything else.
The ride was fun while it lasted, but there are so many other stories out there, and some have characters that I would like to follow.
Nitpicks:
" and where the hell am I going to find another Nerf gun up here?" Correct me if I am wrong, but I think that this should have been in past tense.
"and carried on along crest of the bank to fetch the other three." Pretty sure that it is missing a "the"
"my good man" There be no man in FiM, humans are a wild wild myth!
" I swung my back leg at a precariously perched structure" I am pretty sure that the norm is to use "hind" here… but with the amount of hands and feet that I have seen mentioned…
"Why is New perk: Soccer Hooligan" Unless its part of some meme should it properly be "its"
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That's reasonable. This story is incredibly goofy, and if I were writing it again (it's five years old at this point), the first thing I would do would be to slash most of the references and ground the action a bit to focus on the social engineering.
If you're looking for a story that's less of a mean-spirited circus act and more of an earnest, reflective character study, I'd just like to suggest that you take a look at Make Love Not War, the sequel to this story. Same protagonist but without the sugar rush, and disconnected enough from Duck and Cover that they don't need to be read in order. That said, if you've got other things to read and Duck and Cover has put you off, I totally understand. Thanks for giving it a go anyway!
A completely amoral protagonist looking forward to having fun killing wasteland raiders?
Gentlemen, I believe we have achieved full satire.
I don’t know what’s worse, the fact that every raider is overly British, or the fact I understand them all.
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well, that makes me feel better for reading make love not war first now
you mean nerf footballs right
..... so wait. Is Atom Smasher British? Or whatever the Equestrian version of British is?
Love the story so far.
Edit: Apparently so!