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What's that smell? Is it blood?!... No, it's a Snickers bar... But what is inside?
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Haven't read it yet and I know exactly which fanfic we're dealing with here...
Update: Wow.
Wow, wow wow.
I really, REALLY enjoyed this.
The way everything played out, the emotions, the intensity... It was perfect.
You've earned a follow from me.
Interesting...
Okay, so first things first, some of the tenses are a bit messed up; occasionally you'll slip from past to present tense. Also, a few things just don't flow too well, like:
Should be "Good night". Aside from that and a few other errors, this is a pretty solid gore fic. Though I find the premise that Rainbow would go insane so easily to be a little far-fetched, that and humanised fics aren't my thing. Still, the gore was pretty well done and the descriptions were nice; you're getting an up-vote from me. Now, since I got here from Authors Helping Authors, would you mind reviewing a fic of mine?
3411424 Yup. What fic, and is it long? Please, don't make it too long!
3411461
Nah it's not too long, mate, it's even a bit shorter than yours.
Link.
Le fuq, Rainbow...le fuq
I liked this fic.
It had a good premise and well done.
But one thing I found hurt it was some parts seemed a bit too rushed, mainly around the start.
Overall I love this story
3421770 Best reaction ever
Oops I tried to run.
Anyway, good read, despite it being a little rushed at some points. Upvoted and fav'd
A little predictable, but enjoyable nonetheless.
I enjoyed this! This needs a sequel!
3712722 I have to dance to this
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And then she found "rainbow factory".
Best fan fic I've ever read this year! This deserves a sequel!! :D
This is one of the best things I've ever read!! Please write a sequel with the others please!!
Holy hell, that was great! Not the best, but it's going in my favorites for sure, I loved it!
I'm just wondering when she'll get to Rainbow Factory...
have a go.l.for..l.