Experimented on one too many times, Deadpool our somewhat loveable mercenary transformed into a force bent on erasing literature itself. Drawn next to the land of Equestria by a force unknown, will the power of friendship succeed against this evil?
1.) How did I know you were gonna give the CMC the same fate as the Power Pack?
2.) This is just a suggestion but why not use the red color option to color Deadpool's evil conscience?
3.) If you are planning a sequel... Think you can have DP "Liberate" The Conversion Bureau? If you haven't read the story though, you should give it a chance. Good read.
1. Uhh... i don't know what you meant. sorry. please explain to me what CMC is and Power Pack - just letting you know i am easily offended by being told a noob. Sorry that i'm a noob
2. The consciousness being colored is an initial thought actually, this is my first fan fic and i didn't even know it's possible to add images before - apparently you can color text too...
3. I don't know the "Conversion Bureau" but i will try it since you recommend it.
Welcome. And its ok, I am still barely writing out my first story!
CMC is the short version of saying Cutie Mark Crusaders also, and remember what was insinuated in the comic when Taskmaster was hunting Deadpool in the first book by issue 3? That's what I meant. Lol.
But there's no guarantee that the CMC will end up dead yet (Power Pack! i remember now! damn that was a long time ago when i read the very first Deadpool kills...) but like i said, i have something really big right now - and i will guarantee you that i will fuck up your minds this time (if i failed to in this chapter)
Good luck on your first story! i hope you get the praise and support i'm lucky to get in my first fan fic!
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Comment posted by lordofmyth deleted Nov 1st, 2013
my 'very special someone' posted a comment and it was removed? and two times no less!
now, if someone was kind enough to report the dick for me that was very nice of you! otherwise, well i'm okay with not having his comment put dirt all over our fun either way, right? reading comments should be fun! it's either full of praise and excitement or helpful criticism! not some long winded ramblings or out-of-the-topic complaints from someone who clearly has nothing better to do.
3428610 smiles humorously. except for the fact i was the commenter, and I removed them myself for the sake of not starting and argument. no more, no less, not someone coming along and defending your work just me deciding it was low of me to go around bashing someone's work, though largely thinking this story is too stupid to waste effort on.
so you are basically thanking me for thinking your sotry was not worth my comments.
So it's the 'Pinkie Pie, or Pinkamena Diane Pie because that's the name of a serial killer (but not really, it's just her full name), is crazy and wants the universe dead because fun' plot?
Demon Pie wants everyone dead, because she thinks it will be fun. This story is all kinds of fucked up...AND I LOVE IT!!!!! If Deadpool kills anyponyelss, PLEASE LET IT BE THAT BITCH CELESTIA!!!!!
What beautiful songs.
Can't wait for next chapter!
I think I will enjoy this. I think I will enjoy this very much.
I has three questions:
1.) How did I know you were gonna give the CMC the same fate as the Power Pack?
2.) This is just a suggestion but why not use the red color option to color Deadpool's evil conscience?
3.) If you are planning a sequel... Think you can have DP "Liberate" The Conversion Bureau? If you haven't read the story though, you should give it a chance. Good read.
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I has three answers.
1. Uhh... i don't know what you meant. sorry. please explain to me what CMC is and Power Pack - just letting you know i am easily offended by being told a noob. Sorry that i'm a noob
2. The consciousness being colored is an initial thought actually, this is my first fan fic and i didn't even know it's possible to add images before - apparently you can color text too...
3. I don't know the "Conversion Bureau" but i will try it since you recommend it.
Thanks for reading!
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Welcome. And its ok, I am still barely writing out my first story!
CMC is the short version of saying Cutie Mark Crusaders also, and remember what was insinuated in the comic when Taskmaster was hunting Deadpool in the first book by issue 3? That's what I meant. Lol.
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Oh ho- gotcha.
But there's no guarantee that the CMC will end up dead yet (Power Pack! i remember now! damn that was a long time ago when i read the very first Deadpool kills...) but like i said, i have something really big right now - and i will guarantee you that i will fuck up your minds this time (if i failed to in this chapter)
Good luck on your first story! i hope you get the praise and support i'm lucky to get in my first fan fic!
WO HO!! LOOK WHAT HAPPENED HERE!
my 'very special someone' posted a comment and it was removed? and two times no less!
now, if someone was kind enough to report the dick for me that was very nice of you!
otherwise, well i'm okay with not having his comment put dirt all over our fun either way, right? reading comments should be fun! it's either full of praise and excitement or helpful criticism! not some long winded ramblings or out-of-the-topic complaints from someone who clearly has nothing better to do.
fuck trolls, right guys?
3428610 smiles humorously. except for the fact i was the commenter, and I removed them myself for the sake of not starting and argument. no more, no less, not someone coming along and defending your work just me deciding it was low of me to go around bashing someone's work, though largely thinking this story is too stupid to waste effort on.
so you are basically thanking me for thinking your sotry was not worth my comments.
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sure, why not? please. do tell me how your time is so wasted here and how much energy you're 'wasting' by even keeping up with the story
oh - thanks for reading though, now that you made me think of it it is a bit harsh of me to not thank you at least once. so rude of me
i give you A for effort though
3428685 your still the guy who thanked the guy who deleted his own comments by the end of the day. kinda hard to say muhc in defense of that.
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Actually no. If even you finally found out how pointless is what you've been doing, that in itself is a defense already. smartass
So it's the 'Pinkie Pie, or Pinkamena Diane Pie because that's the name of a serial killer (but not really, it's just her full name), is crazy and wants the universe dead because fun' plot?
I'll just pass on this one, thanks.
Demon Pie wants everyone dead, because she thinks it will be fun.
This story is all kinds of fucked up...AND I LOVE IT!!!!!
If Deadpool kills anyponyelss, PLEASE LET IT BE THAT BITCH CELESTIA!!!!!