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Applejack tries to host a hoedown in Ponyville, but is truthfully afraid to admit that she's scared of failing. Will she fail horribly, or will she tell her friends in time for them to help? Will this whole event come crashing down the first year it's hosted?

Made for One-Shotober

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

Not a bad story but you could put a little more depth in the details. I mean it was pretty fast read. Just something to think about.

Did someone say hoedown?

3405277 I know. I'm lazy. Sorry if you didn't like it... :fluttershysad:

3418694

I like it, it just seemed like it could be elaborated on in some parts of the story. I'm lazy too, so I can understand it. :pinkiehappy:

3418943 Yeah, thanks for the advice! :pinkiehappy:

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