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You know, this could have turned into a really shitty clop fic.

But it didn't.

I shall like it just because of that.

3396413 You're lucky I don't write clop then. :pinkiehappy:

EDITED.

So she's ummm....beeyetch that doesn't like ummm BANANAS?:trollestia:

3396462 You are not going to start this.

"I don't like Bananas-"
Well nerds to you Ma'am.

That was certainly... Interesting... :rainbowhuh:

Why do I think that this is a joke about fans of Onision? :derpyderp1:

3396462 I know where you can go that doesn't have BANANAS...:trollestia:

My dirty mind made this title sound so wrong. Damn you l, brain. WHYYY???

I was like...

wut?

...throughout the entire read, in a good way. Well written short story. :twilightsmile:

Meh - kinda bland

I counter with this! Banana

So Rainbow dash doesnt like Bananas?
Well Bananas dont like Rainbow Dash!,
err to be fair, i dont think anyone likes Rainbow Dash.

3396982 :rainbowhuh:
Everypony likes me! Even me!

3397065
*Is about to reply with a slightly mean/funny comment*
*Instead realises its better to say nothing at all.*

This is really lazy
You can tell you just copy and pasted these paragraphs, for one it says the exact same thing and two, the spelling mistakes are in the exact same place :ajbemused:

“I SURRENDER!”
Dash opened her eyes wide, and fell down from a tree. She rubbed her head tiredly. “What the heck? Was that another dream? Must’ve been…”
Right next to Dash she saw her pet turtle tank floating, with Angel the bunny, Opal the cat, Winona the dog, Gummy the alligator, and Pinkie Pie all stood at her sides.
“Hi Dashie! How was your nap? Was it another weird dream?”
Rainbow Dash nodded and slumped down into some grass she was laying in. “Yeah, weirder than usual. It actually had you in it, Pinkie,” she stated.
Pinkie Pie smiled widely from ear to ear, and started asking a bunch of questions. “What did I do? What did I look like? What was my emotions? Oh, wait, that question has an obvious answer. Well, what happened? Did I do good things? Did you –“
Dash covered Pinkie’s mouth with her hoof. “Pinkie, I’ll tell you about it later. All I can tell you now is that it was about bananas, just because I said I didn’t like them, and that’s where the weird part happened. There was this banana group that got mad at me- It’s just too complicated to explain all right now, especially sense I’m still tired.”
Pinkie Pie had scrunched up her nose angrily when she heard Dashie say that she didn’t like bananas. She pulled out a banana that came out of nowhere. “You mean like this one?”

Also Tanks a tortoise! A turtle live in the sea! A tortoise lives in land

3397231 Dude, do you even read the author's notes? Feel free to dislike this. I don't care what you think, FREAKIN HAVE A FREAKIN LAUGH!

3397740 i dont want to laugh to this :ajbemused: i cant laugh to this.

3397910 Well, then, why don't you just say NOTHING AT ALL? That's a better option, if you ask me. If you can't laugh at this, if you can't even giggle at this, just know that it was meant for One-Shotober, and that I HAD to finish it quick if I were to complete the challenge, and yeah. Dash had the same dream over again, so the whole thing happened over again to make people laugh. At a young age of myself, I'm trying my best. This was meant to be a dumb story idea until I got into it. And how would you feel if I called you lazy on your story just because I didn't like it? Sir, you need to work on thinking before saying.

3398053 :rainbowlaugh: i am lazy on most of my stories, i barely ever write anything for em!

:pinkiehappy: This is good stuff!!!! Please keep writing!!!! You have more potential than you think!
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I am so confused. In the good way.
This was enjoyable.

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Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes XD:ajbemused::ajsleepy::raritydespair::pinkiesick::raritycry::scootangel::raritystarry::twilightoops::eeyup::trollestia::rainbowkiss:

What did I just read...:rainbowhuh:

3684833 A confusing story, that's what you read!

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