• Member Since 2nd Jul, 2013
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River Road


Writing Comedy, Adventure and Slice Of Life. Desperately trying to keep up with all the crazy stories my brain comes up with.

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River Road is one of many ponies in Canterlot, leading a more or less normal life.
But from time to time he comes across a special pair of ponies.


First place in the Straight Shipping group's OC-tober contest.


Also 100% approved by Twilight's Library.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 27 )

This has nothing to do with the story, strictly speaking, but it's a great song and I think it fits rather well:

*applauds enthusiastically* 24 hours well spent! This is an adorable love story, and a great ending for River, his good dead did not go unnoticed. I loved the interaction between the couple, so sweet and special, you can feel how much they really love each other. Without River, that could have been missed! Love your writing style, keep it up!

Arn't you glad I showed you that contest :derpytongue2: and thank you for the cameo :raritywink:

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I'm glad it cheered you up. :twilightsmile:

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I'm sure once my exams are over I'll be very glad. Just give me two weeks. :trixieshiftleft:

Oh you posted it...didn't notice it :pinkiehappy:
Still, my opinion from yesterday is the same. A wonderful story with a cute plot.
This is, like your other stories really enjoyable and happy to read. I hope you will win the contest :pinkiesmile:

Well written, and a really good example of telling a story where the main characters are not always the focus.

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Thank you. :twilightsmile:
I'm trying to bring a new concept into each story I write.
Or maybe it just happens by itself? I can't really tell anymore... :twilightblush:

Very cute story, I'm glad I decided to read it.

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Thank you :twilightsmile:
I really like how this story turned out.

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Meheheh, It will be stuck in your head forever. :trollestia:

...There are probably worse fates, actually.

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Sounds like good practice to me.
Sometimes when I write comments I fall into the character of Pinkie Pie, Rarity or Applejack for some reason. I am not sure why that happens, but it usually fits quite well with the content, and I do admit that it is rather fun.

Also, I will be waiting for that story. If you need an editor or pre-reader, you know where to ask, darling. :raritywink:

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The one story he didn't favorite :ajsmug:
He did now.

How does this not have more likes and views?

Congratulations. That's the first time I've cried happy tears in a long while.

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I have no idea. The whole contest went pretty disappointing, generally speaking...

In this case, though, I blame the combination of lack-of-cover-art and it being an all-OC story.

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Thank you. I personally think this story might be my best yet *coughbetweenmanymoregreatstoriescough*. :twilightsmile:

I thank you for those comments. I don't nearly get as many of those as I'd like. Those two short comments from you already made my day. :heart:

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