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Commander_PonyShep


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Back then, Princess Twilight Sparkle entered the human-world to chase Sunset Shimmer for her missing Element of Magic. However, there was a catch: Her friends could not enter, because all six Elements of Harmony would have reacted differently in the other world, and thus cause untold chaos and destruction. This left Twilight to instead rely on her friends' alternate selves, while her friends were left behind to wait for their only friend and leader.

And now, back at her library, Twilight now summons her friends to go on a brand new quest! To compensate for their inability to accompany her into the human-world, Twilight sends them to a second Canterlot High, one that has an alternate version of the adorkable princess herself, but no alternate versions of her friends. There, the human Twilight has no friends nor want any, and it is up to her pony-self's friends to teach her about the magic of friendship. And, much like Twilight's trip into the last Canterlot High, it would involve two things: An alternate Sunset Shimmer, and the Fall Formal Princess Pageant.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 17 )

Well i dont normally read humans stories,
But if you make human versions of changelings,
Then you sir get all the muffins.

i will read this to see where this story is going in the future and i like it please make more chapters for this story

Intresting. I am curious to see how this goes.

Huh......Well that escalated quickly.

I really expected Sunset to get punched in the face.
Yes please student body, do try and bully Rainbow. See how well that goes. Probably with you out the nearest window.

3422627 Wait, Sunset is student body? Also, Rainbow hitting Sunset would've gotten her kicked out of the school.

Hmm, I saw a couple of errors in this chapter, otherwise it is looking good. Please go on with it! :pinkiehappy:

3424419
Ok, apparently i am slightly dilusional, as the student body part was based on something i thought i read but nothing similar was actually in the chapter. Now i am concerned for my mental health.

As for Rainbow, I cant see her caring to much, since they don't actually go to school here. Still, the verbal spar was good to.

To anyone wondering what happened to the prologue, I've unpublished it so that I could take some time to edit it. But don't worry, I'll bring it back ASAP, and it'll be an improvement from the original version.

Cool story are you going to update anytime soon?

doing good so far keep up the good work can't wait to read more.

This is even better than the original 2013 movie.

Keep Writing! Don't give up!:twilightsmile:

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