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Abramus5250


Learn to love the writing, of telling a story that you want told, and not the recognition that comes with it. When skill and passion atrophy, write for yourself, and in time, you'll inspire others.

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Twilight received a letter from some far-distant citizen of Equestria. At the time of its arrival, she had been terribly busy, but then she was finally able to open it and read it.

This is the chaos that followed that fateful day.

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Take out the ______ hours later thing and replace it with a line separating the two parts. You type in [ hr ], but without the spaces, where you want the separator line to be. It's meant to show time passing or a change in scenes.


This is what the line looks like.

Other than what I said in my last comment, I enjoyed this cute, little story. It's not perfect, but I like it.

Ah yes, spelling mistakes, my old foe.

I'm in trouble:applejackunsure:

I mean, on the one limb, it's flattering, but yikes.

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