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DegeTheMighty

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She didn't even think. Sweetie Belle simply ran, as far away as she could. Until her legs got tired, she sat in a field of tall grass, wishing she could just take everything back...



Inspired by this beautiful Song -> Don't Stay Here
Chapters (1)
Complete Published: Oct 22nd, 2013 Download
1,096 words
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Aura Zero
Aura Zero #3 · Oct 24th, 2013 · · ·
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I liked this a lot.

RikiBlade
RikiBlade #4 · Oct 26th, 2013 · · ·
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This was very well written, this is a good example of a good one-shot :pinkiehappy:

Princess Glitzy
Princess Glitzy #5 · Feb 5th, 2014 · · ·
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Great story! But, I noticed a few errors.

“No,” Sweetie Belle started, “I shouldn't have just ran out like. It's not your fault. You're busy and I get that.”
“But I should never be too busy for you. You're in one of the hardest stages of life, and I should be there to support you. Not the other way around. I love you.”

You forgot a few letters. I added them in red.

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