• Member Since 14th Oct, 2013
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Phoenix Avalon

Hello, I'm here for the candy-colored ponies, nice bronies and good stories.


After the burning of the Royal Archive, Luna seeks to prove herself a useful addition to the royal family by preserving Equinsgard history, salvaging as many historical documents and piecing them together to the best of her ability while she struggles with her feelings of inadequacy and neglect within her own family.

Note: This is a side-story taking place in Avenging-Hobbits Harmony's Warriors universe, as ordained by the author himself.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 64 )

I, the mighty Avenging-Hobbits, am pleased by this.

Have a mustache.:moustache:

3381509 Finally the Mustache of Awesome has been bestowed upon me! I will not disappoint you, Master! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

That is the longest title ive ever seen. At least, for a fanfic!

When I read this just as "The Fey Queen" and thought it part of your world I loved it and now you made it part of your brother's and Again I love it. My hat's off to you Old Sport.

3381552 Yes, I am sadly stricken with the sin of pretentiousness as my brother can tell you. I attempt to hide my shame but it often comes out in my work :facehoof:

An excellent first story, and a most wonderful and satisfying read, my dear! I heartily look forward to more of the same!

And may I say, you and A-H make an absolutely wonderful collaborative team!

And before I close (and call it a night; I'm a bit tired), have a mustache. (Or two. Or three. Or...however many.:raritywink:):moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Hehehe! :rainbowlaugh:

No worries. I thought it was clever.:twilightsmile:

Over 9000 words. Yikes, little long to read now, but I'll get to it tomorrow.

3381509 And 3381528

I DO NOT APPROVE OF THIS!!! :twilightangry2::twilightangry2:


I am ashamed of you both :moustache: but for this time I will forgive you...but next time...be ready..

*invokes the ancient rites to summon Simon O'Sullivan*

3381923 Yes, I did not intend for it to be so long but it kinda got away from me :derpyderp1:

3381675 Oh my, satisfying is seriously one of the best compliments you can give to any writer so I cannot thank you enough! :heart: A-H and I hope to keep you all satisfied with quality work. :twilightsmile:

3383015 *invokes the ancient rites of Google to summon the knowledge to understand that comment*

3383202 You will come to understand...

In time...

3383192 Well, I'm glad that I could do you the honor of that, so you're very welcome, sweetheart. Just keep doin' what you do so well, and I'll be with you for the ride, for however long that is is. You have now joined your dear brother on my "Favorite MLP Writers" List, and I doubt either of you will be leaving it anytime in the foreseeable future.:twilightsmile:

And I have absolutely no doubt that you both will. The Harmony's Warriors series is one of my very faves, and will be for some time to come.:ajsmug::twilightsmile:

Heck, put it this way: if this site had a "Favorite Favorites" Section, you guys's fics would be firmly ensconced in it!

But, as it doesn't, I have to settle for keeping a Harmony's Warriors folder in my e-mail folders section for the chapter e-mail updates.

That, and printing the new chapter off so I can read them later when I don't have access to my comp or the internet. I hope that you guys don't mind me doing that.:applejackunsure:

Wow. That wasn't the kind of thing I usually read, but it also reminded me of the the grim fairy tails are written. Very well done. I look forward to more. I would recommend more dialogue in the future though. This was a bit difficult to follow, mostly due to a few grammatical errors, I had to double check a few parts to make sure I knew what was happening.

3383748 Well, I'm happy that I've made you happy, hun. That's what friends (as well as faithful readers) are for.:twilightsmile:

(Dang, why can't this site have a "hug" emoticon?! It'd come in handy.:applejackconfused:)

Long Title is long. Story added to read queue.

Oh he gave YOU permission to do a story in his universe, but every time I ask to do something his universe he denies me that chance and I'm forced to make my own Harmony's Warriors in a future era of HIS UNIVERSE! It's official he's a greedy asshole.

4282225 First of all, sir, I am his co-writer and therefore have the permission of expanding his universe. Secondly, I really don't know who you are and why you are harassing me about something that is clearly between you and my brother. Third, if this is my brother's work he has every right in the world to not allow you to write in his universe for whatever reason.

Now if you do not cease and desist in writing me or comment on another piece of my work I will make every effort to block you and report you.

This is your last warning. Good day.

Sorry... I didn't realize at the time it was you. Just thought it was someone else.

This chapter; I like it. ANOTHER!! *smash*
I only have one thing to point out:

So the stallions and mares were called from the fields into the walls of the city to slaughter the goats and crush the grapes for the feast.

I thought goats were semi-intelligent in Equestria.

4350378 More like a society that eats other intelligent creatures. Like this.

...Now I'm reading all your comments in pinkies voice.

Quick question. If this is a one shot, why is it marked Incomplete?
That being said, I really enjoyed this little bit of world building. I hope to see more from you in the future

4452769 First, thank you so much for your lovely comment and I'm so glad you liked the bit of world building I was able to do. :yay:

Second, I do intend to write more installments but have chronic procrastination disorder and so have been shamefully neglectful (I'M A TERRIBLE PERSON :fluttercry: )

Third, your avatar is AWESOME :pinkiehappy:

4455730 In their defense, it could be a turkey.

"You never told me your name."

"Apologies my lady. It's Sombra."

Also, Sunset is an Asgaurdian? I like where this is going.
Out of curiosity, do we have a forum or something where we have a list of spolier-y things like this? I keep missing things.

5465479 Hmmm, I don't think we have a forum (thought that sounds like a great idea actually!) but my brother does keep a list of characters and their alignments and MCU equivalents so if you PM him I'm sure he could clear up what you're missing.

Also, glad you enjoyed the Sombra reveal!


That was a pretty good chapter. I won't say it was amazing or anything, cause it felt more like this is a chapter that builds up to something awesome, but I really enjoyed reading it. A few letters missing that changed the meanings of certain words. Didn't trip me up too much while reading, but if that sort of thing bothers I recommend a proofreader. I patiently await further updates.

5465694 Ugh yeah, I meant to have it proofread but since it took me so long to even post it I didn't want to wait any longer. And I myself wish I could have done more with this chapter and it was supposed to be M U C H longer, but I felt then it was too long and bloated with characters and intense happenings. So yeah this is more of a build-up chapter and I hope at least in that it made you excited for whats to come!

5465981 Oh definitely. I tend to get caught up in stories like that. Gift and a curse sometimes.

Kinda glad you left this one on the short side. I rarely find myself with the time to read anything longer than 5000 words. I'll leave it at work is hell. So I can sympathize with the lack of posting.

Very nice. Didn't catch all the references, but that just goes to show I need to study more mythology and such

I won't mention some of the foreshadowing and irony so your other readers can find them. :pinkiecrazy:

...This story deserves so much more recognition simply on the amount of research done. That's not even getign into how brilliant the Alicorn Family is written.

5778431 Yeah, I tend to try to throw in as many references or allusions to stuff as I can if I think it fits the tone or the direction of the story. I don't even remember some of the things I put in there until I sit down and read it over again. :derpytongue2:

5778538 Excellent show of restraint, little lord of chaos :pinkiecrazy:

5782051 :raritystarry: WOW THANK YOU :pinkiehappy: I feel kinda unworthy since most of my "research" is just the consequence of me being a major nerd who reads history books for funsies. :twilightblush: And I did try very hard with the depiction of the family dynamic, since I enjoy complex and layered relationships, hopefully I have succeeded in that aspect and shall continue to do so :twilightsmile:

-She probably wants to keep her away from all the stallions--”
-Luna couldn’t see what kind they were but she assumed they were the ones she often observed her boiling in water to help with the aftereffects of drunkenness.
-Celestia would put on her grinning mask...
-She's barely an entire year older but she's already at least seven years ahead of me!"

I just realized that Celestia would be a very fun Tony Stark.

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