The Bet

Pinkie pie learns that Fluttershy has a bet for her and pinkie. The wager is more than surprising for Pinkie as she realizes that she just might lose it. Can she stop the bet before it is too late or has she gone too far.

Chapters (3)

The Bet · 24th Dec 2013 · 1,021 words
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Pinkie's Story · 15th Jan 2014 · 370 words
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Return To The Present · 19th Jun 2014 · 602 words
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fluttercord45

fluttercord45 #1 · Dec 31st, 2013 · · · The Bet ·

I see u have ur first story. Looks good

mylittlebrony15

mylittlebrony15 #2 · Dec 31st, 2013 · · · The Bet ·

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Thanks more will come soon

mylittlebrony15

mylittlebrony15 #3 · Dec 31st, 2013 · · · The Bet ·

thanks for the advice and i will get to fixing all that.
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mylittlebrony15

mylittlebrony15 #4 · Dec 31st, 2013 · · · The Bet ·

i already have a proofreader

DiscordedWhovian

DiscordedWhovian #5 · Dec 31st, 2013 · · · The Bet ·

Nice story. I can't wait to see how this turns out! Poor Pinkie! Because of the gore label, I think I smell some cupcakes~

mylittlebrony15

mylittlebrony15 #6 · Dec 31st, 2013 · · · The Bet ·

maybe youll have to find out.
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DiscordedWhovian

DiscordedWhovian #7 · Dec 31st, 2013 · · · The Bet ·

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Oh, indeed I will.

mylittlebrony15

mylittlebrony15 #8 · Dec 31st, 2013 · · · The Bet ·

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pm me for who gets killed but i aint tellin how

DerpyDitzyDerpyDo

DerpyDitzyDerpyDo #9 · Dec 31st, 2013 · · · The Bet ·

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But you didn't use my proofread vers...

DiscordedWhovian

DiscordedWhovian #10 · Jan 16th, 2014 · · · Pinkie's Story ·

What. The. Buck. Did I just read.

I cannot comprehend this. I must reread the last part. *le read*

My God. I cannot believe this... this glorious thing that has been presented before my eyes. A little lacking on the details side (how did she get out of her room...?), but it makes up for it with it's... feely-ness, if you do a dramatic reading in your head. Hats off to you, friend.

mylittlebrony15

mylittlebrony15 #11 · Jan 17th, 2014 · · · Pinkie's Story ·

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I had thought of putting detail into it but think of it this way I gave you a wonderful gift. I'll let you fill in the details with what you want. Whatever you think happened it did. That way if people don't like a certain thing in the story they can change it to the way that makes them understand the story. Just think on that.