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TheTobacconist


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Equestria's Greatest Dad is a title that Mr. Cake is proud to hold. What will he do when Magnum walks into his shop carrying a coffee mug emblazoned with his title? The same thing any other logical stallion would do in that situation, fight.

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Your stories always makes my day:rainbowlaugh:

3380812
You have no idea how happy I am to hear that. Your comment just made my day.

3380813
I've learned to strike when the iron is hot.

3380824
Pinkie Pie can't be in here. She skulked off to sulk when Mr. Cake let that embarrassing detail slip.

A fight well worth having! Now for the moms. FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT!

3380850
The dads know better than to be around for that.

3380853
Yes, I think she would appreciate this conundrum.

3380850
Though having Pearl throw cookie shaped throwing stars would be hilarious.

Pinkie has learned her lesson and doesn't drink water after nine o'clock anymore, okay? Can we stop bringing this up? :pinkiesad2:

3381372
I'm fairly certain the soda got her.

This is so awesomely ridiculous. I love it.

*Grins* oh dear...I see this leading to Rarity and Pinkie with best sister tees and then likely the little kids won't care due to the age gap.

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Rarity probably wouldn't want to make a big deal out of it.

...Pinkie Pie might.

Urgh, I am sorry to be the first to downvote this, but I thought the whole fight didn't pack any punch. I am sorry I am not able to tell you why.
No hard feelings, right? :pinkiesad2:

3519781
No hard feelings, but I would like an in-depth reason if it comes to you.

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I'm not sure but I'll try.

I think the pace is too slow. It's like they're taking turns and so it doesn't read like a testosterone induced fight but more like... well, showing off? The actions don't flow into each other but there is one action and then that one is done, so we've got time for the next, so lets see what might look cool.
I am aware that the whole "over the top" thing is most probably very intended, but I think it's not getting to its full potential because there is nothing holding all of it together.

Man, I wish I was me 5 years earlier because back then I was able to express myself properly. :facehoof:

Short & Silly! :pinkiehappy: Enjoy the like, with this complimentary mustache! :moustache:

This is like that one episode in Dexter's Lab where Dexter and Mandark's dads fight over the "Greatest Dad" title.

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