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electreXcessive


I am an average everyday brony. I like to let my creative juices flow and create things. I'm always striving to improve, so I hope you enjoy my stories.

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Many years have passed. With his naïve shell shattered and the reality of life pounding against him for his entire life, Snails returns to Ponyville as an ancient pony. Lamenting about his life, Snails walks the path of memories.

Author's Note: A great thanks to the wonderful Flint Sparks for helping to write this fic with me!

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Gelding?

Uh oh...

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Yeah, changed that up. I didn't write the descrips, but I should've checked what certain words meant before I posted :V

OH :pinkiegasp:

OH GOD :pinkiegasp:

That escalated quickly. :rainbowderp:

But, in all seriousness, this was a very thought-provoking and deeply meaningful piece of literature, and suffice it to say that I am glad that I read it. :twilightsmile:

Now, if you'll excuse me, I need to get back to explaining the difference between saturated and unsaturated triglycerides for my organic chemistry class.

3375859 Well, maybe 'organic chemistry class' isn't the best word for it. It's a part of my Honors Biology class.

I’m sorry if I’m repeating myself, and I hope you’ll forgive the rambling of a tired, old gelding

I just couldn’t help myself, though I suppose now that you see how the world shaped me and the gelding that I have become.

Uh... I think you mean stallion. :twilightblush:

That is why I come here sometimes; to remind myself of what I once had, but have now lost. I come back to a place that was special for me and an anchor for my life. I think that I’m the only one that still visits this old place. The others all forgot about it when it was shut down, so I guess in a way me and the school are similar. We’ve been forgotten by the world, in its ever turning continuous expanse.

This paragraph is repeated twice in here...

And that ending... those feels... :raritycry::raritydespair:

Other than the corrections, a nice vignette. :pinkiesmile:

Im sorry, but i couldnt help but wonder over the whole "gelding" thing and how he seemed to insist it. still good, regardless of that.

I know you didnt seem to know what it meant, now that im looking at comments, but its always wise to check word meanings to be sure.

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