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Crulocrius of Honeycomb


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When Princess Luna departed for the land of the changelings only a year and a half ago, she made one fatal mistake. She put a batpony by the name of Starlight Weaver in power. Now, his high ambitions threaten all of Equestria aswell as the continent of Lionus. He is tampering with the power of the Nightmare Forces in order to make his dream of an Ultimate Lunar Republic, a world of batpony superiority over all else, a reality. Now, the armies of Equestria, New Lunar Republic and Solar Empire, stand as one to face this threat.

A World of Warcraft crossover.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 6 )

Ice Zebras:trixieshiftright: really can't come up with a funny right now but I will when it is not 12pm.

I see this is based on World of Wacraft's Siege of Orgrimmar. It's no secret that the batponies are analogue of the Orcs. And from this line,

" I have fought alongside the buffalo and the zebras and others!"

they are analogues for the Tauren and Trolls respectively. I can't wait to read more.

Now time to discuss the flaws of this first chapter, the spelling is alittle off. Second, we could do with more backstory of how this world got to be like this. And finally as you said yourself,

a lot of this was copy-pasted.

PS, Will the Mane Six appear in this?

Not bad, not great but not bad.

ice zebras

:facehoof: really? Why not Yetis?

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