It's that time of the year where they have the biggest downpour of the fall season. As Rainbow Dash finds herself stuck in her cloud home, bored to death, a certain orange Pegasus crashes through her door.
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*Sniff sniff* I smell a DashFire. I never, ever, EVER miss out on DashFire! Ever.
~SolidFire
My dashfire sense is tingling! a story is afoot!
Edit: oh, and the part where dash really was scootaloos mother was amazing! i really liked it. think this will ever turn into a full blown story?
I love spitdash, thanks for writing this otp shipping
Nice story!
Omygoshyes! Twixie please
Well that escalated quickly.
This was epic!
The whole Rainbow Dash being Scootaloo's mother thing- it's very unique. This fic was amazing. And I'm not a huge fan of Spitdash. Well, I don't mind it- but if there's more fics like this... I'm seriously going to check it out now. Join a group or some shiz.
And I've made a personal goal to write every shipping there is with Rainbow Dash... I'll be taking notes from this fic.
Awesome story! I luved it!!
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Glad you did.
MOOOOOOOOOORE! THIS NEEDS TO BE LONGER! GAAAAA IT WAS JUST GETTING TO THE GOOD PART TO!!!!!
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I MIGHT continue it...
>> DragonGenesis
please do, it was beautiful
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If you do decide to continue this... I don't know, pace it out a bit more or something. I loved the concept of this story. I mean I LOVED it like crazy. The way you introduced Dash as Scoots' mother was pretty awesome and, quite honestly, I didn't expect that at all. My only qualm with some of it is in the execution. In my eyes they seemed just a bit too familiar with each other. And some scenes could have been drawn out a heck of a lot more, adding details galore and just making things easier to follow in total. Keep me in mind and feel free to ask me any questions if you decide to further this promising tale of two pegasi. I like to consider myself a resident DashFire expert, especially considering it's my OTP and something that I have a crucial eye for. Best of luck with what you try out next!
~SolidFire
Oh god.... the FEELS!
Seriously, this was a great story. The romance part seemed a tad out of place, but it makes sense if you think about people falling in love with their idol. And Dash also sees Spitfire as her idol...
Hm... is this more genius than I thought?
Anyway, here, have a penguin.
THE FEELS SEEKING MISSILE STRIKES AGAIN!
Good story.
(witch means almost noting)
Great back story for scoots.
and it was spitfire.
8/10.
you know you can go to a full story out of this right? Don't hawe to if you ant got the story in you'r head.
Other wise great story you get the Tobben seal of approval
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Me gusta penguin
New chapter! Buck
!
Also: THE FEELS!
Keep writing.
there
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I didn't know you were going to update this. Awesomesauce.
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Suprise!
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Yep, like getting a Hearth's Warming Eve gift a day early.
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Everyone does.
... murderous manager?
Hahahahahaha....
What an idiot... she isn't called 'Spitfire' for her calm, cool and collected personality...
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damn Dash. Getting all the badass mares. 
*imagines Spitfire actually spitting fire.*.
Aw, I can't say no to a bro hug request.
Anyway, can you say Mood Whiplash? This freaking nutcase Sunny Days can. Holy shit, ten seconds after we meet him and he's already planning a double homicide. How much bloody bits is Spitfire worth...?
Oh, that much...
I hope this Sunny Skies turs out to be more competent or at least more devious than Blueblitz's Brian. Didn't see any errors. Good chapter.
Smart move Spitfire!
'Nother great chapter
... death threats upon the elements of harmony are like death threats upon the crown itself. Does this stallion know the game he's playing at?
because, if I can recall... politics are dirtier, uglier, and darker with a lot higher stakes and risks than the world of the media, and the world of showbiz despite it being like no other biz...
can
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fling
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I wonder how Sunny will deal with this change of events now that Spits just pulled a quick one on him and he has already paid for services yet to be rendered.
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Oh, I have special plans for him.
Oh shit, Sunny hired Agent 47 to kill Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo.
I came here for the Spitdash and the feels, what the hell happened?
(Also: Keep. Bucking. Going.
)
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Nah, I just have a thing for beautiful plot twists.
They were assassinated by Sunny Skie's men.
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and
You call that a plot twist?
t my pants when I read it. And I wrote it!)
THIS, is a plot twist.
(Sorry, but believe me, I still sh
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Okay you made me get my anti feels armor out of the closet and I'm now ready for the next chapter! please don't use a feels-seeking-missile my armor does nothing against a strike that accurate.
3473684 I made you get out the anti-feels armor?
Wow... Well it was kinda self defense... Right..?
What the plot twist!?!
Call Princess Twilight and the gang!!!
i want see blood and Revenge
Ah, a pretty good finish. Bad guy dies via gravity. other bad guy eats his gun, third one arrest to no doubt break out of jail later, all nice and good.
Also, noble ponies are jackasses.
Also, since when is Spitfire German!?!
Now I have to go back and read the whole story again with her having a German accent! I have stories to write too!
Anyway, I seemed to have missed being shanked in the feels again by Scootaloo. Yay for my feels!
Also, take this penguin. You like penguins.
The sequel should have Scootabelle shipping.
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Penguins!
is there going to be a sequal?
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Maybe. Im going to see how my writing schedule is going and if i can come up with a plot.
Heat seeking filly inbound take cover
3540508 yes - heavy weapons guy
It's dangerous to go alone here take SANDVICH!!! - heavy
Well that was a thing. But please don't remind me of that version of robin I prefer the more modern version as that was the robin I grew up watching. And trust me with how similar in looks scoots has with rainbow I always thought the two had some relation.
Hmm, another SpitXDash....Me likey da cupcake here!
Anyways great start here, and as I get more time I will read more.
For now though take this Fave and Like! 