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Twinkletail


I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.


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Applejack always comes up with the best presents for Pinkie. This year, she's got a very special cake for her very special somepony's birthday.

Written for One-Shotober.

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Comments ( 20 )

A sample of my reactions to this story, in order of appearance:

O_O :applejackconfused: >_< :pinkiehappy:

BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
:rainbowlaugh:
This was absolutely perfect! Your other stories look interesting, I think I'll read them!

:rainbowlaugh:

You takes the risks, AJ.

This makes me smile.

*Starts reading...*

Wait, AJ is hiding in the cake? :rainbowhuh:

*Recalls Pinkie taste-testing cakes for Celestia in Swarm of the Century, and the closing scene in Mmmystery on the Friendship Express*

:rainbowderp: ... this can only end badly.

*continues reading*

Well, that went better than expected. :rainbowlaugh: Have an upvote!

The comedy is strong with this one! All the laughs! First my comedy T-T-T-Tia! and now this! I think i'm gonna need new ribs after this week. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Upvoted indeed. :moustache:

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Discord is amused. :rainbowlaugh:

(Ah'm glad y'all find mah total embarrassment so dang amusin'.) :ajbemused:

I'm picturing the scene in "Under Seige" where the girl pops out of the cake oblivious at first to the fact that only the cook is there to watch her dance.... kind of works in reverse when your baby sister's one of the viewers. Would have been doubly fun if Pinkie Pie's family were there...

Well, I would think that she should have told someone in case this happened: confide in somepony (Dash), Get the lingerie and makeup lessons from somepony (Rarity), learn how to build the contraption (Twilight), or inform the cakes of a surprise. Oh well only has herself to blame.

When I got the surprise I literally went "BLOODY HELL!" out loud.

This story has been added to the Good Grammar Directory. Congratulations! :pinkiehappy:

I have not laughed so hard in a long time. Thank you!

I actually thought pinkie was gonna eat the cake whole like usual.

Now that they're related I feel creepy for having liked this story

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Maybe related! It's an important distinction :pinkiehappy::ajsmug:

3773037 Since they're (probably) not related, it'll be okaaaaaayy

3773647 So distantly related that it really is more about friendship than blood.
3773037 The end made me laugh out loud.:rainbowlaugh:

Should AJ be disappointed that her marefriend told everyone but her that the party was starting 2 hours early? Lol!

:ajbemused:

:applejackconfused:: O/////O Oh dang...

:rainbowderp:: Holly bucking hell she looks hot...

:raritystarry:: DEAR CELESTIA!

:fluttershyouch:: Oh... my...

:facehoof:: Well, she screwed THIS up...

7222361 Also forgot this...

:pinkiehappy:: SQUEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

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