Let Her Eat Cake

Applejack always comes up with the best presents for Pinkie. This year, she's got a very special cake for her very special somepony's birthday.

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Keradon

Keradon #1 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

A sample of my reactions to this story, in order of appearance:

O_O >_<

PyrodianBrony

PyrodianBrony #2 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

This was absolutely perfect! Your other stories look interesting, I think I'll read them!

JetstreamGW

JetstreamGW #3 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

You takes the risks, AJ.

Esle Ynopemos

Esle Ynopemos #4 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

This makes me smile.

The Ponytrician

The Ponytrician #5 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

*Starts reading...*

Wait, AJ is hiding in the cake?

*Recalls Pinkie taste-testing cakes for Celestia in Swarm of the Century, and the closing scene in Mmmystery on the Friendship Express*

... this can only end badly.

*continues reading*

Well, that went better than expected. Have an upvote!

Dash The Stampede

Dash The Stampede #6 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

The comedy is strong with this one! All the laughs! First my comedy T-T-T-Tia! and now this! I think i'm gonna need new ribs after this week.

Upvoted indeed.

EquesTRON

EquesTRON #7 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

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Discord is amused.

(Ah'm glad y'all find mah total embarrassment so dang amusin'.)

punzil504

punzil504 #8 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · ·

I'm picturing the scene in "Under Seige" where the girl pops out of the cake oblivious at first to the fact that only the cook is there to watch her dance.... kind of works in reverse when your baby sister's one of the viewers. Would have been doubly fun if Pinkie Pie's family were there...

Zeyon The Green

Zeyon The Green #9 · Oct 23rd, 2013 · · ·

Well, I would think that she should have told someone in case this happened: confide in somepony (Dash), Get the lingerie and makeup lessons from somepony (Rarity), learn how to build the contraption (Twilight), or inform the cakes of a surprise. Oh well only has herself to blame.

DigitalChaos