Mixed Melodies

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Sofia123

Sofia123 #1 · Oct 20th, 2013 · 2 · · Epilogue ·

Nice for your first story, DC. Maybe, you could ... write a sequel? Pinkie Please?

ArkemWrite

ArkemWrite #2 · Oct 20th, 2013 · · · Epilogue ·

Sweet! the doctor is in the building!!

brealia9794

brealia9794 #3 · Oct 21st, 2013 · · · Epilogue ·

and as promised yours truly will do a reading of it on my channel. this is great

Forsain

Forsain #4 · Oct 29th, 2013 · · · Epilogue ·

FUCK, WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD AT EVERYTHING!!!!! GAH!!!!!

Rosaline17

Rosaline17 #5 · Oct 30th, 2013 · · · Chapter 1 ·

So far, really interesting to say the least. It started off a little rough, but I like where you're heading with it. Keep up the good work on your other stories!

Rosaline17

Rosaline17 #6 · Oct 30th, 2013 · 2 · · Epilogue ·

I'm of the mind with Sofia123. This was a very well done romance fic, even had a VERY well detailed sex bit in it. Overall, I give it an 8/10. Only two things I didn't like;
1. Why isn't there a sixth chapter?!
2. Only a few spelling and grammar errors, as well as some spots in the story that I got mixed up in. Those being the "she did this, and she did that" bits. Anyway, back on subject, great job, hope to see more.

thecookiewookie

thecookiewookie #7 · Nov 7th, 2013 · · · Epilogue ·

Wow. I love Vinyl ships anyway, but the way you fleshed out (punpunpun) Jade Eclipse was excellent. I also approve of the semi-anthro. An author loses me when hooves become hands, but just short of that is just right for me. Well done, good sir, well done. Have a moustache.