• Member Since 23rd Apr, 2012
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Cosmological Principle


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Few are the profession that require the night as much as a thief, and few are pony's that understand the nights importance. The night's wind whispers to me, whispers of the things her shadows hath touched; she guides me when my eyes cannot and she knows of me as i know of her. If i was not a thief, i could not live in under the night's magnificence. I feel what the night feels for we are one.
And i am her thief.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 14 )
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plz get away with it

Very well written I think I only saw one or two small typos. I liked the story and this OC sounds intriguing. I am looking forward to reading more.
:)

Your OC, I like him greatly. I do hope you continue this tale.

ohhh I thought the thief was a girl.

This is a most excellent treat to read. *bows* It is but my shame that I have but one thumbs up to give.

this deserves way more views it's amazing

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We have two thumbs in real life...
Why can't we have two here?
I would ceartainly give both to this story.

I like, the updates are fairly fast and the story itself is good. Though, the grammar needs a little work.

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I tired to write it with archaic terms and methods; such as gift and candle rather than gifts and candles.
If you're talking about something like spelling than i'll go in and fix whatever i missed in my pre-reads.

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Nothing to big, just remember your I's need to be capitalized.
(That's an i not an L)

This is a really good story, I hope you don't abandon it. I understand real life comes first, but could you tell me what is keeping me from reading more of this epic adventure? thanks :twilightsmile:

you have a week to update this story or give me some kind of response to tell me you aren't dead or this leaves my read later. :fluttercry: this is a pretty good story and i'd hate to see it go, but its taking up space. :pinkiesad2: hopefully you see this before it's too late

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