A Crash and Hello

Big Mac's receives the honor of meeting Ditzy Doo for the first time. She's rather downhearted about the circumstances...

A collab with my friend, electreXcessive.

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Manes

Manes #1 · Oct 18th, 2013 · · ·

Great story I don't see many fics with big mac as the main character anymore.

Flint Sparks

Flint Sparks #2 · Oct 18th, 2013 · · ·

3364958
Wait awhile. As long as Fimfiction stays, I have a huge project in the planning stage.

Manes

Manes #3 · Oct 18th, 2013 · · ·

3364991
What you mean 'long as Fimfiction stays?'

Zenkuo

Zenkuo #4 · Oct 18th, 2013 · 4 · ·

3364999

one thing you'll learn on the internet is that a lot of things are temporary

Bpkyle777

Bpkyle777 #5 · Oct 18th, 2013 · · ·

I can't exactly place why, but I loved this story. I only wish it'd be made into a full-fledged thing instead of the brief one-shot it is now, but I digress. It was beautifully written and I have to agree with 3364958 that Big Mac isn't dealt with enough on FimFiction. Can't wait to see what this "huge project" of yours is.

Just one thing though:

“Doo! Ditzy Dop! I-I’d love to!”

You should probably fix that.

Flint Sparks

Flint Sparks #6 · Oct 18th, 2013 · · ·

3365686
Nice catch. 'O' and 'P' are right next to each other and 'p' looks like an 'o' when you're typing...
It's short because I have to write 31 short stories by the end of October as part of a challenge.
However, this could turn into a cute story between Ditzy and Big Mac. I might expand it once the challenge is over.