The punishment
Rainbow Dash could feel the air and wind in her mane as she flew towards the Library. She noticed Scootaloo was shivering a little. Dash then spoke, “Okay Scoots, when we get there you might not like your punishment,” Dash said and then noticed she was getting closer. “Alrighty, Scoots, this is our stop.”
As soon as Dash landed, Scootaloo began making a run for it, but thanks to Dash’s awesome skills she pinned her to the ground, making sure not to hurt Scootaloo. She then grabbed Scootaloo by the tail and started to drag her to the front. Scootaloo tried grabbing things like the side of a house, and even dug her hooves in the ground to slow the mare down, but she ultimately failed, and just accepted what ever Dash was going to do. They reached the door of the library, and Dash quickly opened it, and dragged Scootaloo to the stairs of the library and dropped her in, quickly closing the door and turning the knob to lock it, before staring at Scootaloo with a sad gaze, hiding her anger. Dash then turned, and trotted next to her friends still staring at scootaloo.
Scootaloo turned around to see all of them looking at her with angry faces, all except Pinkie, who was smiling for some reason.
‘oh damn,’ Scootaloo thought as she expected to get the worst. Scootaloo then turned, and tried to leave through the door, but she was soon elevated in a purple aura. She turned to see it was none other than Twilight Sparkle who was pulling her back.
“LET ME GO! LET ME GO! SOMEPONY, ANYPONY, PLEASE, HELP ME FROM THIS PSYCHOPATH! Scootaloo’s month was then shut tight with magic. Scootaloo looked up at Twilight wondering what the buck this unicorn would do to her.
Twilight looked at the filly, “Scootaloo, you are insane, and you must be punished. All of us, except for Pinkie, Fluttershy, and AJ, are going to punish you.” Twilight said matter-of-factly.
She then opined the door to her basement, and moved the squirming filly around, before dropping scootaloo onto the floor with a thud. Scootaloo began rubbing her rump to make it feel better, before she looked up at Twilight.
“What are you going to do. Stare at me for a punishment? Because I think that would work.” Scootaloo began to laugh and pointed a hoof at Twilight.
Twilight was getting annoyed at this point, and threw a huge book onto the ground in front of the filly, making her jump in surprise. Scootaloo slowly looked at Twilight, then back at the book, confused. She also had noticed Dash was sleeping, and Rarity was just polishing her hooves for some reason. Scootaloo tried to find a place to run by examining the room, but there was nowhere to go. She was trapped. Hoping this punishment would end soon, Scootaloo decided to just lay down on the wooden floor, and take what was coming.
Rarity came back with one pink dress, and instantly, Scootaloo’s face turned green, like she was about to puke.
“Are you kidding me? I have to were that?” Scootaloo asked, slightly embarrassed before she looked away, her cheeks turning a red.
Rarity placed the dress down and levitated Scootaloo over, placing her on a soft chair.
“Ok darling, let’s have some fun.”
Rarity proceeded to put makeup on scootaloo, before she levitated the dress and placed it on her.
“Oh my… darling you look so beautiful now. Where's my camera?”
Rarity was now looking in her saddlebags, before she pulled the camera out with her teeth and held it in her hooves.
“Say cheese, scootawoo.” Scootaloo smiled embarrassed of her situation
Scootaloo looked at Rarity, who was in love with her work, then at Twilight, who wasn't even paying attention at all, then to Rainbow Dash, who was just holding back her laughter.
“That does it!” Scootaloo shouted with a bit of annoyance.
Scootaloo tore the dress off and threw it at Rainbow Dash, but Dash was too fast, and saw it coming. Dodging, Dash turned to face Scootaloo.
“Haha. You missed.” Dash said, then noticed Rarity looking at her in a weird way. Dash then turned around, and saw the dress was somehow on fire. Quickly, Dash grabbed a bucket of water from the side of the room, and put the blaze out. Rarity grabbed the remains of the dress and left, leaving only Twilight, Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo in the basement.
Twilight then came up to Scootaloo.
“Okay. I don't think I need to punish you. I'll just leave this to Rainbow.” Twilight then turned, and walked up the stairs.
Scootaloo let out a sigh of relief.
“Phew. That was close.” She muttered, before looking up at Rainbow, who was still a bit angry.
“Ok Scoots. I'm going to teach you what happens when you launch out of a cannon. I'm going to-” Dash was cut off as she looked at Scootaloo. The filly was scared.
“Uh kid what's the matter.”
“I-I... you're going to abuse me, aren't you Dash?” Scootaloo asked.
Dash was in shock that Scootaloo would even think, that her sister would do something like that. Dash spoke up after a seconds silence.
“Scoots, I would never do that, and I wish I knew where you got that idea from.”
Dash rubbed a hoof on Scootaloo’s back to calm her down.
“Not that what I'm going to do is explain the dangers of what you’re about to do. I mean, it will be pretty awesome… but stupid and dangerous.”
Dash began explaining.
“First off these documents say that Spitfire launched herself out of a cannon like this, and almost lost her wings.” Dash said sadly, making scootaloo nervously look at her wings.
four hours later
Scootaloo and Dash both fell asleep. Twilight opened the door and yelled, “IT’S TIME TO WAKE UP AND GET YOURSELF HOME!”
This caused Scootaloo to wake up, and she quickly noticed Dash was somehow how still asleep.
“I guess I’ll see ya later, Twi.” Scootaloo said, before she left the basement and exited the oak tree, before heading straight towards Sweet Apple Acres.
Scootaloo parked her scooter on the tree that their tree house was built on, and breathed a sigh of relief.
“Ah. Home at last.” Scootaloo then got her covers and prepared to sleep, grabbing a picture of her parents and softly speaking to it.
“Good night mommy. Good night daddy. I miss you guys so much.”
With a few tears falling off her cheeks, Scootaloo drifted off to sleep.
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Still incredibly rushed. And since when does abuse tie into punishment?
i loved it good chapter
3516028 thank u
ummm i really had a hard time reading this.
twilight and some of the others really felt out of character.
twilight the most.
3516278A little bit to short for my liking, but fairly good.
4 Out Of 5 Happy Pinkies)
And no not That good it can use some work In some places. Like ' How did Dash get a cannon?' or ' Y would Scootaloo disobey Dash?' but all-an-all A good story.
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Shined,
Slowbro95
3546742 thx
3546752Your welcome.
really cool.
x one thousand (out of 10 rds)
3556793 im glad you liked it
3775758 glad to hear
Bad grammar, poor word choice, and spelling errors, twilight seemed incredibly OOC. I dont think any of the mane 6 would have the nerve to punish someone else's child. I could see them trying to go to scoots parents and offer to punish her but just outright doing it no. All negative things aside the way you write the interaction between scoot and dash is fantastic . I loved that you had scoot struggle and try to flee rather than just be a passive aggresive grump about it.
TL;DR grammar and concept issues aside the way you write scoot and her interactions is unique and original. It made me believe she was homeless beacuse she had a survivors attitude. Flee when threatened and wait for opprotunity when cornered.
Now I. Feel like a jerk at that person who said scoots didn't have. Home. man that hurt when she went off on her own.
Kinda really amines me want to believe what I think the picture hints
Next chapter here I come
3813563 I'm am sure
parents are well up there.
3813563 By that I mean dead.
This chapter was weird. The punishment bit was all over the place. "Everyone except Applejack punish her" "Three of us are gonna punish you." "Twilight: I don't need to punish you."
Dress randomly going on fire was funny, but Rarity's lack of reaction and just leaving was a missed opportunity.
Then you have Dash and Scoots just randomly falling asleep after Rainbow starts a lecture.
It was too all over the place to be a good chapter.
It still needs work. Please get on it so I don't have to spend a ton of time translating this.