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Moniker


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Cold Fire a little colt from Canterlot gets chosen by newly made Princess Twilight Sparkle. One thing of an issue for the colt, his powers are unnaturally powerful and dark. Why is that? Why does the young colt have these abilities? Read in and find out.

My thirtieth story!

Currently looking for artwork.

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Comments ( 6 )

... Rushed. That's all I have to say. Should have added a bit of backstory, or something 'higher-up' so to speak... But other then that I like this story... I think. Not much has happened yet :rainbowwild:

Great! What's his cutiemark... Just asking..,

3363344 Same as Twilight's except dark gray.

This has tons of grammar errors in it.

Also, you should go into more detail.

That's all I have to say.

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