(Takes place before season 1)
It has been nearly 1000 years since the banishment of Nightmare moon. Equestria has been in peace for some time now. But as the longest day of the thousandth year approaches, Luna prepares for her escape, hoping to be freed from her curse, while a darker side of her only wishes for destruction.
Inspired by WoodenToaster's Nightmare Night, Lost on the Moon, and sillyfillystudio's Daylight's End
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Interesting. The only issues I see here are some of the word choice and variations of such between the two characters and how short the story actually is, but it served its purpose. Anyway, nice work
3396283 thank you
The only problem that I see is how rushed the story is. You could have made the battle between Tia and Nighty longer. Otherwise, good work.
3419861 I know. at the time of writing this, I was kinda mad at my father and irritated by everything, so it was hard for me to think.
thank you though. all friendly criticism is welcome