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Sunny smiles had a nice life, until his parents died and he had to move in with his uncle.
Then after many unfortunate events he decided to leave and seek out the world.
He meets many new friends along the way and discovers many more enemies.

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Proof read your story there are several obvious spelling and syntax errors in this. Otherwise the concept is pretty good and also nice use of rhetorical devices and foreshadowing. Can't wait to see how this develops. :derpytongue2:

286904 Yeah I know I am actually a student and microsoft word 2007 sucks majorly

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