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hawthornbunny


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Elusive and Applejack are fed up of Blitz's awful-looking eyebrows. They decide to take matters into their own hooves. It doesn't go well.

A Rule 63 story, based on and set in the same universe as On a Cross and Arrow by Conner Cogwork.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 35 )

"It blends so well with your coat," said Elusive, with a sweeping motion toward Blitz's flank.

I hate to get into stereotypes but if he's not gay in this story then I'll eat my.........well damn, I don't own any hats.

3361492

Elusive isn't gay. Didn't you read On a Cross and Arrow? ^_^

3361498

No actually, I just saw the description and thought it was worth checking out.

3361845

OaCaA is definitely worth a read, even if just for its legendary fandom status. It's also an adorable, exciting, and heartwarming story which I love to bits. ^^

3361880

Saw you had two dislikes, hope my like gives your story a chance at more readers. It's good.

3361902

Thanks very much! More is on the way :)

Thought you could use an extra like, :pinkiehappy:

3361498 Rarity's canonically straight, yet she's been mare-shipped more times than I can count. It's Fanfiction- sexuality changes by story and according to writer's headcanon.

3366205

She's not canonically straight. She's been shown to like stallions. That doesn't mean that she's 100 percent straight.

3366212 I'm aware of that- but seeing as Word of Gay hasn't said bi (and likely never will, unfortunately), straight is the most likely assumption. I would personally assume bi, but that's because I have shipping goggles thicker than a copy of Unfinished Tales.

3366205

On a Cross and Arrow established Fluttershy, Rarity, and Applejack as straight, and Rainbow as bi-curious. Twilight's probably asexual and Celestia knows what Pinkie is. The same is true for their male selves.

It probably won't be relevant however, because this isn't a romance. ^_^

Oh... I think I see what is going on here.

I'll bet the carpet matches the drapes now. Elusive, you scoundrel! :derpytongue2:

3361498 To be honest him NOT being gay turns me off from reading it.

3369398

Then you probably won't like this story. :)

"I'm just trying to get as much information as I can," he said. "I think I know what's wrong."

"You do? Oh, thank the stars," said Elusive. "What is it?"

"End of the world," said Dusk.

Wait. What?

And Dash has converted her male self to the joys of reading. Bravo!

Wait, should Rarity and Elusive get together, what would their kids be like?

3375223

Thanks! I hope you enjoyed. ^_^

Wait, should Rarity and Elusive get together, what would their kids be like?

Inbred? :)

3375243

I always considered that to be a possibility.


Anyway, great story!!!

3375260

Thanks!

Rainbow Blitz's eyebrows have always bugged me because they just look so... wrong. ^^ They're completely unnecessary for his character design and just look stupid. So I decided to fix that with a fic, and, well, it turned into this. :)

I wish I could click "like" multiple times for more likes. Oh well, the one like from me was well-deserved, though.
:D

Beautifully done. Practically sequel-level, with that same lightheartedness of Cross and Arrow. :pinkiehappy: I enjoyed this very much.

And yes, they were silly-looking eyebrows. :rainbowwild:

3378199

Thank you very much, I consider that high praise indeed!

3375833

Thanks! One like is fine by me ^_^

3373718

Exactly the reaction I wanted. ^^

:twilightoops:.........

Well SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII-:raritydespair:

Oj jeez this is so hilairious XD i love it great work :rainbowlaugh:

3905858

Thanks very much! It could be better, but I loved writing it. :)

ahahahahhahah XDDDDDDDDDD
So funny...
this story is adorable it is now mah fav... XD
:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

3985750 I'm very glad to hear that, thank you! I love writing disgruntled Applejack in any gender. ^^

this could totally be an actual episode of MLP :P

4259254 - I wouldn't want to inflict that on people!

4259299 i would, especially if you use the word inflict, which implies that its bad because i'm a horrible person :D

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