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Wishing on a star

As Fluttershy leaves her birthday party at the sugar cube corner she walks home into the night thinking about her wish, what her friends think about her and why she even bothers... but ever dark cloud has a silver lining, and her wish just may come true, in more ways than one

( tagged as sad due to sad, possibly dark life questioning scenes, but nothing too bad)
Just say what you think, I won't judge, it helps develop a story

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SuperKamek

SuperKamek #1 · Apr 27th, 2015 · · · Deep wounds ·

How have no comments been made yet? Ah well. This is a nice story. Keep it up!

Spitfiresign

Spitfiresign #2 · Apr 27th, 2015 · 1 · · Deep wounds ·

5912642 Thanks dude! I'm glad you think so even if I suck at writing

SuperKamek

SuperKamek #3 · Apr 27th, 2015 · · · Deep wounds ·

5912811
Everyone is an author, even if that passion for writing is deep down. And if you don't think writing is your thing, there are about 5 million other professions out there.

Either way, this is still pretty cute. Not the best story I've read (sorry if that offended you, but I'm kinda straightforward like that ), but certainly entertaining.

Spitfiresign

Spitfiresign #4 · Apr 27th, 2015 · 1 · · Deep wounds ·

5912835 That's fine, I enjoy writing it but I'm really bad at writing it as a story, honestly I just wrote this to see if anyone would read it, but I do enjoy thinking about the plot of the story, since this was actually something that came from a dream which is a little weird, come to think off it a lot of my ideas for stories come from them...