• Member Since 6th May, 2013
  • offline last seen Nov 30th, 2016

AdrianVesper


Everyone is the hero of their own story.

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You live on the outskirts of the Crystal City. You have a job. Every day, you go down to the gravel path under the railroad bridge and move crates from a full cart to an empty cart. A pony in a black suit watches you. For as long as you can remember, every day is the same. But today is different. Today, you opened one of the crates.

This is your story.

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Comments ( 11 )

Dammit this stories name is such a troll. I got the notification for it and got really confused and WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME!?!?!:raritydespair:

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Nah it's just me being me.
Definitely put it to read later (it's 12:39am and I'm barely starting my college work because I'm at my most productive late at night... My logic and thought process is definitely a bit unorthodox...:applejackunsure:

This story is messing with my mind... :derpyderp2:

I like it... :pinkiecrazy:

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OK, it's not often that you read a story and then sit and contemplate it afterwards for as long as it took you to read it. Granted, it was a short one, but still.

Brilliant and original concept. And the narrative was amazing and catching.

Just. Wow.

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You just keep making my day. Thanks man.

Nice, I like it. My type of story. Reminds me a bit like my Memorioums but different.

I love A Story About You

Well this is different from the usual fare, and in a good way. Can't help but wonder where the 'story' ends and 'reality' begins, especially seeing how it gives two different beginnings, so to speak (book from crate and book from library), where either one could theoretically be the 'true' beginning, or something separate entirely. Great job. :twilightsmile:

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