When a foreign pony threatens to conquer Equestria using a device known as 'The Wendigo Shrine', it's up to Daring Do and her partner, Jackhammer, to bring an end to him! She will travel to the ends of Equestria in an attempt to stop him, but will she succeed in saving Equestria? Or will the dangerous elements, and henchmen cut Daring Do's adventure short?
Feedback would be pretty awesome. I'm trying to improve the quality of my writing, but that's kind of hard to do when I don't know what to change.
Cover art is done by me, ThePartyCannon, at DeviantArt (http://fav.me/d4rne8b)
Chapters (10)
At the time that I'm writing this, I am 3 paragraphs in, and I've already hit "Tracking."
Good job, I'll comment more later if I need to.
286320 Thanks! I didn't really think I did that good of a job at the beginning. Or the middle. Or the end, really. But I'm glad you like it!
I say this is very good story. Just one thing, "A brown pony shuffled his feet. "feet"
425085 Mother of God... That's slipped past me for over a month now. Clever eye, good sir. Thank you!
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Don't mention it. Speaking of Daring do stories, i really need to get back to mine. I have been lazy in writing.
428488 Yeah, me too. Vacation's do that to ya.
I've read your Daring Do story though. It's pretty awesome! Can't wait to see more of it.
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WHy thank you. And yes, i need to get back to work on it. But it's really hard writing, Wrong hospital, Undead Equestria, and that all at the same time. Maybe i shouldnt have started all of them at once.
428801 Maybe. That reminds me of my friend MAGO5. He has ideas for at least ten different fanfictions that are somehow all connected but unique at the same time. And I just gave him a new idea a few days ago. He says the best way to be able to keep up with all the different ideas and stuff is if you're completely insane.
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Yeah, I may be slightly insane. I already spend an average of four to five hours a day at my computer writing.
And you friends with MAGO5, I jelly.
430627 Wow, five hours is quite a lot... I usually only stick around for an hour or two, which is why it takes so long to update things.
I actually found the time to go back through and read this fully. This is REALLY overlooked. Maybe you slipped off the new story bar before it was seen. But this is very good.
Oh, and a side note.
FFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!! You used the name of my main charector from Undead Equestria.
lol
460881 Thanks, and yeah, that's what I was thinking too. It's just that my means of advertisement are only with me and MAGO5, and that doesn't cover a large area.
And as for the name Sunny, I went through and read your story (Really good, by the way). I mean, 'Sunny' is just a good name for whatever you need.
466519 I know :D
Stop posting new chapters to your story. You make me feel like I have to update Mine. And I'm pouring my heart and sould into Wrong Hospital.
Dang. You're creating a good story here. I'm just brooding pure insanity with my Daring Do story.
527200 Thanks! I liked your Daring Do story though. Being all insane and crazy and all that was never really my forte, but you pulled it off surprisingly well; it was pretty fun to read.
541473 Just finished the story. I think EqD's gonna take it.
541492 They better. It's good enough to get on there. And hey, if they don't accept it, rioting is always another option.
Man, I reccomend you edit this. then edit this. then edit this. and then do it again for good measure. then send it to EqD. They love Daring Do stuff. Just make sure there are like NO errors at all or they normally say. Fix dis, then you have to wait another week. But this is damn good.
554362 Thanks, as usual. I'll see if I can force, er... I mean, persuade MAGO5 to help edit this. I'd love to send it to EQD, but I think I'll finish it first. There'll only be... two more chapters, maybe? It's not that much longer, but they'll be far more likely to accept a completed story compared to an unfinished one.
554462 Yeah.
Great story, so greatly under apreciated.
but
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I know, I really wish this would get more attention because it really deserves it.
Hey Cannon have you tried sending this to EQD?
593093 I'm considering it, but I'd like to finish it. I've only got one more chapter to go (unless I feel the need for some kind of epilogue) which means only one more Mountain-Dew-and-Honey-Bun-filled night before its done. So... Hopefully it'll be on EQD in a week or two. Crossing my fingers!
I've been reading this one since you put out the first chapter and I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed the ride. It was a very good read and you have my applause good sir.
635663 Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I sure did.