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Screwball comes to ponyville to see her dad but his in cantorlot business. So she hangs with fluttershy till he comes back then she gets board so she tells fluttershy if she wants to have fun around ponyville. What can possible go wrong?

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Hey I see you got a story started, brilliant first chapter, I like how you depicted Screwball she is AWESOME!!! but just a Tip, use the Tab button before a sentence and space the speech because I kept losing my place, It just makes it more readable apart from that it was Awesome, Can't wait for more. 8/10 mmmmuuuuusstachheeee :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

It was a great first story and for that you get 5/5 moustashes
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Thanks everyone :pinkiehappy:
3369472and I try doing that I think they would excepted it idk why so I did that

3370318 cool no worrys, keep up the good work. :heart:

3370323 thanks I'm working on my next story soon

fisrt off, i like this story:derpytongue2: fluttercord is best pairing

17 of all 10 muffins earned:derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

besids the wall of text part and me lossing my place ever five seconds(usig bad lenses.:twilightsmile:) it was pritty good. i wish you'd write this story more.:fluttercry:

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1.maybe I should making a sequel to this story:applejackunsure: but I have some story's to do maybe if I have any time.

2.sorry about losing ur place ill try to fix it.:twilightsheepish:

3.thanks I love me some muffin and fluttershy and discord are the best pair ever :heart:

3496809flutter's and discord arn't best ship.:moustache: every ship, except rarity spike is best ship:yay:

glad to hear thier might be a sequal:yay:

3497223 ur right there's many shipping and yeah there might be

Screwball comes to ponyville to see her dad but his in cantorlot business.

Is it 'his' or is?

By the way.. GREAT STORY!

Poor screwy, good fic.

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