**This is another diaper story, but perhaps my lightest to date. It's more about something else. Written to describe the feelings one friend gives me.**
Black is a bat-pony of Luna's Night Guard.
White is a pegasus in Celestia's Royal Guard.
Black doesn't let anything change his mind.
White is a bit of a pushover.
Black will say everything, except when he doesn't.
White will keep his mouth shut, except when he doesn't.
Black doesn't notice everything around him.
White doesn't either.
Black will be brutally honest, ripping what you do to shreds and point out every little flaw.
White couldn't ask for a better friend.
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That was very cute and adorable. Wonderful story Conflicted
Hwat. That was the first thing that came to my mind while reading this. Then it got weirder. I dunno what to feel about this story. I'm so confused. I still liked it, though.
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I really don't know what I expected.
The writing style was above average compared to what i've seen on this site, so that's a definite plus.
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Try his other stuff. This one was more of a personal piece that he posted because people clamour enough for him to write more.
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Hello person who is using a name synonymous with gold. Same as above, maybe try one of his other stories (I'd suggest Pinky Dinky Pie) if you're wondering what the appeal of certain undergarments is to him. If you're still confused, shoot me a PM and I can explain in further detail, should you be so inclined.
this story is so cute, I love how fun and enjoyable the main characters are, and how well they interact with each other.
This story is so good that if you wanted to conflicted you could write an entre back story to these characters. How they mt, how they first learned about the diapers, ect.
Another wonderful story from you.
This is freaking adorable.
"Black doesn't notice everything around him.
White doesn't either."
oh god i lol'd....
That was most definitely cute.
What are friends for, they say.
This was really cute. Not as... sugary as, lemme say, Pinkie Dinkie Pie, this has more of the calm side, but still the very most idea of such a bond between two so much different beings is marvelous.
Upvote and a fave, for sure. Keep up the good work, my friend.
aww that's it? i wanna see more with these characters , i really liked their chemistry.....
New story in the bat ponies group. Interest piqued!
It's a diaper fetish story. Interest lost.
Upvoted for proper use of warnings, bolded and at the top of the description. It's a courtesy a lot of authors overlook, and you deserve thanks for it.
You never cease to surprise me, very cute story my friend
Meekoli before reading: You racist bastard.
Meekoli after reading: This is not racist story... Good job
This was cuter than i was expecting it to be... actually, I'm not sure what I was expecting...
Definitely a lot to take in here. You have a dominant and a submissive. You also have self-esteem in Black while desire for outside validation by White.
The story criss-crosses a lot of what I have come to learn through my years as a more active reader and writer. I'm more of a 'White' who would want someone to playfully serve as a caretaker. However time and life events have made me no longer worry of being found in a diaper. This is why, for some time, I've used my real name when posting larger projects, like the BronyCon CWLTP panels, on FA.
White is definitely sensitive and finds sarcasm / teasing to potentially put him down. However it is quite clear how Black is trying to just loosen him up.
Another interesting point of this story is a dilemma, I feel, most writers come to experience. You can see the idea, make the idea have motion from start-to-finish in your head, but finding the words to describe the interactions, events, and how Point A gets to Point B is truly troublesome.
White holds himself to a very high standard and, if I were to guess, he was raised to have high standards. He may have been teased and lonely throughout school and, for this reason, he opted for a job as Celestia and Luna's guard. Not much need for interaction and the 'armor' they wear is kind of like a security blanket that physically protects him but also mentally provides him a reminder of his importance where he may not otherwise feel it.
Black had very likely taken notice of how 'different' White was acting as a guard. He figured out what White needed and acted. Now he continues to act, quite patiently, as a bridge between the stallion who sees himself as a sissy to be a stallion who does what he does because he genuinely enjoys it without shame.
I had a Black and White moment between 2008 and 2012 with my close pal, Nishi. I was so afraid of how someone would find me out as a 'Adult foal' and, along with my visual deficiency, use it as a weapon to shame me into submission. This meant I didn't openly want to show Yosh in just his diapers. I also was too afraid to validate Nishi's interests as I had worried I'd be shamed if I did.
Then, in November of 2011, Nishi made a post that was kind of like Black coaxing White to leave the safety of their room. It was a picture of a duck's rump, from the waist down, with their diaper lying open on the floor.
I was lost in thought as I saw that particular piece. I thought Nishi was kind of saying, "You've got to stop worrying so much.". So, the two of us talked. Oddly, the picture wasn't even directed towards me but, well, Pandora's Box was opened and what was inside no longer brought nearly as much shame.
It was at this time I had realized how much Nishi had bent-over-backwards for me since we met in 2008. How he always entertained my interests and feelings as I avoided his. This quickly changed and, like White, I started to make stories that I knew Nishi would like to prove how thankful I was for his patience and having not given up on me.