Applejack goes to her usual spot on a rainy day, bringing her favorite photograph with her.
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I need to stop reading these. I keep saying that but I keep coming back to them.
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The feels are a powerful force.
3351318 Your profile pic made me d'waa
I regret reading this, not because it was bad, but because I need to stop reading all these sad stories. You did a good job on writing this.
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You had me worried for a second. Thank you.
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You should check out the blog it came from.
3352072 I did. Gilda needs another episode on the show. Even if she comes back an antagonist.
Very enjoyable and it gave me a good cry.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Ow, my feels.
Knew it was coming, knew what it would do to me but sometimes I just can't stop myself. Very well done.
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Sometimes we hurt ourselves for what seems like no reason at all. But that pain is what makes us feel alive, tells us the we still can feel, you know? The rush of emotion, it's like no other.
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Happiness and sadness, two side of the same coin. Can't feel truly alive without both.
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Exactly.
Well, I did not see that one coming. This is definitely good, although I have one question.
I'm assuming this takes place in a graveyard due to the ending. However, it is referred to as "a popular spot for many Ponyville residents." I know that it adds that the spot is to rest, but I'm confused as to why ponies would want to rest in a place where bodies lie - UNLESS THAT WAS A PUN! Y'know, because dead people/ponies are 'resting'?
I'm laughing way too hard at that probably unintended pun.
Dead Luna, what is wrong with me?
Anyway, I like it, take a thumb-up.
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No, that was intended. It is a final resting place after all.
Oh God no, I thought. In my heart, I already knew.
My feels... why must you hurt them so...? Well done, dear fellow. Well done.
I was feeling too happy anyway.
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3352741not enough build-up, but good otherwise.
Celestia, that ending.... I admit that I didn't see coming.
Thumbs Up and favourite earned.
Very sad! And I'm am not a very sappy person.
Spoiler:
"The weather team had a lot of trouble keeping the larger storms at bay now." I knew. I knew but I didn't stop. Good story, I think I could have done with a little more at the end but it's nice the way it is. Good job!
I've read enough stories involving Twilight`s immortality for this not to faze me...
Only problem I had with it was... It needed some other character(s) sharing the sorrow - not in the way that that character cared for Rainbow Dash the same way Appljack did, but in the way that they lost a true friend respectively...
I really hope this helps you
Dang.... It was well written and all but... dang...
You have my up-vote, but I'm sad now
You bastard... my feels... how could you?!
Pretty decent sad bit for your first try, but it seems frightfully short. True that any decent one-shot should leave options for the reader's imagination to fill in the blanks, but so much of this seems far too open-ended.
That's just my opinion though.
All in all, it's a good start if you're going to dabble in this genre. Hope to see you reach the feature box in the future.
May I ask why Rainbowdash is in the cover art if she is not actually in the story?
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*Sobbing*
there's one thing you can't lose
it's that feeeeeel
Oh... Good job, hon. Fantastic, really. I'm gonna putter around for a while and try not to think about it.
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That's just what was going through my head as soon as the feels started. The style fits Applejack perfectly, doesn't it?
Oh, and just because I can...
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4238957 Tom Waits is my god
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And a finer god there could not be. His music does more for me than most gospels you hear about.
for the most part it had no effect on me
then I reached the end and I wont lie I shed some tears
nicely done it hit me in the feels all at once
4242336 quite so
Not as sad as some stories I've seen, and it was fair predictable... but I did like it all the same.
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I wish to know what happened
Sweet Celestia, so sad loads of feels!!!
At 1st I honestly suspected it would be AJ's parents not RD
Its really hard to pay with emotions like fear and sadness because it takes so long to write them down that you get over them or forget what emotions are (for me anyways). For a first attempt at sad you hit this on the head, short and cutting. Could have used a little more suspense at the end though. I had to cover the last sentence with my hand to keep from spoiling it for myself.
Meh.
You, sir, have an invisible top hat taken off to you! Great job with this story. It's brilliant!
Look at this photograph
Every time I do it makes me SOB GROSSLY
Why did i read this
I'm not sappy.... so i didn't cry
It's still sad though... great story!
I was guessing that the picture would be of AJ's parents, but I stand corrected. Nice work with that. You write a simple, sad AJ, from what I can tell, and I like it.
Wait what!!??? How did rainbow die? I honestly thought it was going to be a photo of the apple parents and rainbow sees apple Jack and comforts her based on the picture.