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TheTobacconist


...can I even call myself this if I quit smoking years ago?

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The Diamond Dogs are tired of living under a rock, and they want to get somewhere in life. It's time for them to make some hard earned bits.
AN: This is 100% approved by Twilight Sparkle's Library.

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Comments ( 17 )

The upper door repeatedly bashed his face him.
Writing in Diamond Dog mode, I see. :trollestia:

Good lord this actually makes me feel sorry for them. Well done

Well this was to good of a story now :yay:keep on write stories :pinkiehappy:

3349788
Thank you, and I will.

Awww... poor dogs, don't you realize you already have gems. Darn you, Flim and Flam!

Well... I rather enjoyed this! The line about Rover's eye looking "festive" actually made me laugh out loud (sadly overused as that term is...). I agree with Fluttercord; keep writing this stuff! I'm the kind of guy who usually prefers the longer stories, with character developement and branching story archs, but somehow I enjoy these little one-shot stories you do. keep up the good work, you've earned yourself a follow.

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Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

3350707
There is just no redemption for those guys.

Aww...I just felt so bad for the diamond dogs, the ponies were total jerks. Totally needs to be a fic of the DDS winning:derpytongue2:

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I'm afraid I'm not familiar with that.

Though in this case, I think the only ones who were really jerks were the Apples. Fluttershy was terrified of them, and Rarity had been kidnapped by them. Though I have to admit, starch in the eye is not very pleasant.

3454798 Flutters was terrified and Discord was kind of a jerk. I get Rarity was kidnapped but she then completely dominated them and arguably was perhaps worse to them than they were to her. and yeah the Apples were just flat out jerks.

Hello, I'm Jacob M. Keene, a voice actor/voice impressionist/narrator. I just wanted to let you know that I did a reading of this on my YouTube channel. I do the narration and voice all of the Diamond Dogs, Big Macintosh, and do the Opal hiss, ShimmerBunnyVA voices Fluttershy, ThunderRiderVA voices Discord, Jessica Pedley voices Rarity, and Izzy Fizzy voices Applejack. I hope you enjoy: https://youtu.be/5KmQrYzpDfw

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