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Zoey had been experimenting in Blackrock with a Technomagic Teleporter. It would combine Science and Magic to send the user into another dimension, like the nether or End. However something went wrong and Rythian shielded Zoey from the blast and was sent into the magical land of Equestria.

Crossover with YogscastRythian's Blackrock Chronicles

Now being edited by Paton Pending

Cover art made by the talented YogsGen on deviantArt

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 20 )

This story seems kinda interesting, but there are quite a few errors in it. For instance, you always have to make a new paragraph whenever someone else is talking. Also, why do you feel the need to describe all the characters? We all know what the ponies look like, and chances are that anyone reading this story has watched some Yogscast video, and therefore know what Rythian and Zoey look like. Furthermore, you should separate different times with a few hits of the "Enter" button, because the formatting looks rather sloppy.

Anyway, I'll be tracking this story for now. I hope to see some improvements.

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I'll try and polish it up late when I have time.

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The FimFiction approval thing says that I have to start a new paragraph every time someone new talks so I cant fix that.

Well...at least he is in a world of magic now. He likes that

I have been looking for something like this for so long....
Please, continue :D :raritystarry:

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Ditto what she said.

3487405 That's one of the first times I haven't been mistaken for a dude on the internet.... everyone thinks I'm a boy because of the whole 'brony' thing. :facehoof: AAAAAAnyway, have a nice day today. :twilightsmile:

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you look like a girl.

3912143 Ikr? WAAAAIIIIIITTTTT.... You mean my pony, right?..... Or are you stalking me? :derpyderp1: Lol....

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Your pony...I don't stalk people irl, I just sit at my computer being useless to the world.

3958999 I know, I was joking, lol. Probably the most interesting thing I've done is crawl around an obstacle course blindfolded.... did I mention it was built for five-year olds? :rainbowlaugh:

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You were blindfolded because...?

3959015 Teamwork. 'Tis because my PFFs were there with me...... :pinkiehappy: .... we should probably end this conversation before it gets annoying..... byezies!

He can't remember anything, if he can't remember anything the the ender dragon can attack equestria. Even if that doesn't happen he won't remember Zoey. :raritycry:

Comment posted by Happydeath deleted Jun 14th, 2014

3357473 is there a reason that this Is on hiatus? It looks like a really unique and neat idea that I personally would love to see more of.

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I haven't spent time on remaking the second chapter that I lost because life has gotten in the way. It's not cancelled, but I haven't done much work on it recently

4545770 oh good I hate to see a good story die before is lived up to its full potential.

Out of all the yogscast Rythian is my favorite (I fully support Zoeythan) So I'd hate to see this canceled....

You know if you would let me i might pick up the story

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