The two most intriguing minds in Equestria sit down and have tea together.
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Utterly beautiful CelestiPie friendshipping, sir. A true masterwork. <3
...Okay, seriously. Thoughts on Chapter 2, you're going places. Big places.
You definitely know how to capture the first person narrative well. Not to mention, your writing is just extremely well-done and sweet <3
This was adorable!
Very well done!
Huh.
Not often you see this.
Even rarer that you see one that works.
~Skeeter The Lurker
That ending. Not bad at all.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I liked this.
This... I like this. My favorite part? It would have to be Pinkie talking about Celestia leveling up.... BUCKING HILARIOUS!!!
This was a wonderful character study. If I had to complain, I'd nitpick that it didn't exactly have an enticing hook to it. But then, being simply about two friends sitting down and having a cup of tea, it didn't really need one.
Quiet enjoyable, yes.
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That noun has been excellently verbed, good show!
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What kind of places?
If you mean professional writing, then I don't think I'm really cut for that sort of thing. Writing on this site is just a hobby, but one I really enjoy; I love entertaining people. 
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I'll agree with the lack of hook. I actually wrote this as a sort of challenge to myself as a writer: could I write a story where all that happens is two characters talk and make it entertaining? Apparently, I can.
Such an adorable story!
I can't believe you actually put in that damned line.
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How could I not?
Celestia has suspicious tea.
75 up votes, 0 down? Will definitely read later.
ObSpellcheck: "Earnestness" rather than "earnesty". Making up words is Pinkie's thing, not Celestia's. Likewise with "strove" rather than "strived", though that one may be valid in US English (I'd have to check a dictionary to be sure).
Definitely an interesting read; thanks for writing it!
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That was great!
~Leonzilla
I love stories that capture a good Celestia and I love stories that capture a good Pinkie Pie. But for one to have both and have believable character interactions? That's phenomenal work. Thank you for writing this, this brought a much needed smile to my face.
May we PLEASE have more. I beg you.
Oh, wow, this was really great! Short and very sweet, and perfectly captured Pinkie Pie's character with a mix of silly, awesome Pinkie lines ("Maybe she could [do] all those royal things because she was so old; you gain more experience each time you level up.") and the more serious, internal understanding that Pinkie shows from time to time. Loved it, just loved it! I even had a little of my own ambiance going on with a loop if fire crackling and some music at low volume, also on loop. Made this a super-pleasant read!
I did, however, notice one tiny error:
–“But that means you’re birthday will be on a different day each year!”
But other than that, this was immaculately written! I shall eagerly continue to the second chapter.
This chapter certainly lived up to its predecessor in every way; Absolutely heartwarming read.
–Her outward appearance did not hint at such a large lung capacity.
And I like how you kept the little bits of humor subtle and classy.
Love this story.
Ah, absolutely wonderful.
1 word FANBUCKINGTASTIC
...Rock wings? Rock hard wings? ...Oh fuck, that's a reference to wing-boners.
Bright, cheery, and a dollop of matureness to boot. Loved the story, and I don't think it needs to be added to anymore. (Was a little long though.)
“And you’re one of the bestest.”
Aww, so cute!
Very, very great. I love this sentence:
Epic one, seriously.
I love this. You've taken two of the most enigmatic characters from the show and described each using the other's perspective. It not only provides some excellent feels for both Celestia and Pinkie but expands upon their characters in a way that gels nicely with the show canon. Well done.
Cele-Pie Friendshipping forevah!
Oh, Pinkie.
They get Schoolhouse Rock in Equestria?
3595148 IDK probably so xD
A story with two of my favorite but vastly different characters chatting?
Yay! 
This is full of dawwww's
~Twi
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Now I want some tea... And a fireplace.
Dude, that was like one of the best stories ever
I mean really, Pinkie is a hard character to write in 1st person. Heck even writing for her at all can be pretty hard sometimes, but writing her thoughts. Only once before have I seen it done so well, but this was still cuter......well....okay more like a tie, but still. Just freaking awesome, I absolutely love it
I'm guessing the next chapter's viewing it from Celestia's perspective, that should be fun.
It was so freaking cute, but that isn't what really made it, no what really made it was how amazing Pinkie's dialog was, it was just so perfect!!!
I don't think Celestia chose them...
That was beautiful.
You've probably heard this a lot, but you're really good at characterizing Pinkie! That was really good, all in all. I love character stories like that.
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I've always thought that, whilst the Elements choose their own Bearers, Celestia might have manipulated things a little, to nudge conditions so ponies she thought would be perfect for the position were there when needed. I mean, it is a really big coincidence that all six Bearers lived in the same town, in walking distance of the ruins where the Elements were hidden, isn't it?
I wouldn't be surprised if Celestia had been nudging certain bloodlines over the thousand years of her sister's imprisonment to make it more likely that a proper Bearer would be around when the time came. Heck, it's probably why she sent the Apple Family out to found Ponyville where they did.
That was quite simply,, literally and just: lovely to read.
Have you considered writing the other one-on-one meetings Celestia mentioned with: Rarity, Fluttershy, Applejack and Rainbow Dash yet? I for one would jump on board that bandwagon in an instant after this.
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First person Pinkie Pie. That rarest of things.