• Member Since 27th Apr, 2012
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JaketheGinger


There are a few Jakes on this website. I'm the ginger one.

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The two most intriguing minds in Equestria sit down and have tea together.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 54 )

Utterly beautiful CelestiPie friendshipping, sir. A true masterwork. <3

...Okay, seriously. Thoughts on Chapter 2, you're going places. Big places.

You definitely know how to capture the first person narrative well. Not to mention, your writing is just extremely well-done and sweet <3
:pinkiehappy::trollestia:

This was adorable!

Huh.

Not often you see this.

Even rarer that you see one that works.

~Skeeter The Lurker

That ending. Not bad at all.

~Skeeter The Lurker

This... I like this. My favorite part? It would have to be Pinkie talking about Celestia leveling up.... BUCKING HILARIOUS!!! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

This was a wonderful character study. If I had to complain, I'd nitpick that it didn't exactly have an enticing hook to it. But then, being simply about two friends sitting down and having a cup of tea, it didn't really need one. :twilightsmile:

That noun has been excellently verbed, good show!

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What kind of places? :derpyderp2: If you mean professional writing, then I don't think I'm really cut for that sort of thing. Writing on this site is just a hobby, but one I really enjoy; I love entertaining people. :pinkiehappy:

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I'll agree with the lack of hook. I actually wrote this as a sort of challenge to myself as a writer: could I write a story where all that happens is two characters talk and make it entertaining? Apparently, I can. :raritywink:

Such an adorable story!

"The mustache kinda helps with that sometimes."

I can't believe you actually put in that damned line. :rainbowlaugh:

Celestia has suspicious tea.

75 up votes, 0 down? Will definitely read later.

ObSpellcheck: "Earnestness" rather than "earnesty". Making up words is Pinkie's thing, not Celestia's. Likewise with "strove" rather than "strived", though that one may be valid in US English (I'd have to check a dictionary to be sure).

Definitely an interesting read; thanks for writing it!

Huh, strangely this story is rather enticing to read. There's some good character interactions, and Pinkie's off tangent thinking is funny, while still keeping true to the character.:pinkiesmile:

This story is a great lesson that, sometimes, all a story needs to succeed is character interaction. There's no epic quest here, there's no villain, there's not really even any exiting inciting incidents. It's just two friends sharing their feelings, and for that, it's a wonderful read. :raritystarry:

Comment posted by SL7 deleted Oct 17th, 2013

I love stories that capture a good Celestia and I love stories that capture a good Pinkie Pie. But for one to have both and have believable character interactions? That's phenomenal work. Thank you for writing this, this brought a much needed smile to my face.

May we PLEASE have more. I beg you.

Oh, wow, this was really great! Short and very sweet, and perfectly captured Pinkie Pie's character with a mix of silly, awesome Pinkie lines ("Maybe she could [do] all those royal things because she was so old; you gain more experience each time you level up.") and the more serious, internal understanding that Pinkie shows from time to time. Loved it, just loved it! I even had a little of my own ambiance going on with a loop if fire crackling and some music at low volume, also on loop. Made this a super-pleasant read!

I did, however, notice one tiny error:
“But that means you’re birthday will be on a different day each year!”
But other than that, this was immaculately written! I shall eagerly continue to the second chapter.

This chapter certainly lived up to its predecessor in every way; Absolutely heartwarming read.

Her outward appearance did not hint at such a large lung capacity.
And I like how you kept the little bits of humor subtle and classy. :twilightsmile:

Love this story. :pinkiesmile:

Ah, absolutely wonderful. :twilightsmile:

1 word FANBUCKINGTASTIC

Yeah, Celestia has rock wings

...Rock wings? Rock hard wings? ...Oh fuck, that's a reference to wing-boners.

Bright, cheery, and a dollop of matureness to boot. Loved the story, and I don't think it needs to be added to anymore. (Was a little long though.)

“And you’re one of the bestest.” :pinkiesmile: Aww, so cute!

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Very, very great. I love this sentence:

Of all the Elements, Laughter is the brightest. Yes, Magic is very powerful, but it requires the other elements in order to be such. Laughter does not have such an issue. Laughter stands tall, a light in the darkness, a beacon of hope.

Epic one, seriously.

I love this. You've taken two of the most enigmatic characters from the show and described each using the other's perspective. It not only provides some excellent feels for both Celestia and Pinkie but expands upon their characters in a way that gels nicely with the show canon. Well done.

Cele-Pie Friendshipping forevah! :trollestia: :heart: :pinkiehappy:

Maybe she could all those royal things because she was so old; you gain more experience each time you level up.

Oh, Pinkie.

“‘Cause three’s a magic number.”

They get Schoolhouse Rock in Equestria?

A story with two of my favorite but vastly different characters chatting? :pinkiehappy::trollestia: Yay! :yay:

This is full of dawwww's

~Twi

Now I want some tea... And a fireplace. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Idaderpie deleted Jan 1st, 2014

Dude, that was like one of the best stories ever:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:
It was so freaking cute, but that isn't what really made it, no what really made it was how amazing Pinkie's dialog was, it was just so perfect!!!:rainbowkiss: I mean really, Pinkie is a hard character to write in 1st person. Heck even writing for her at all can be pretty hard sometimes, but writing her thoughts. Only once before have I seen it done so well, but this was still cuter......well....okay more like a tie, but still. Just freaking awesome, I absolutely love it:pinkiehappy: I'm guessing the next chapter's viewing it from Celestia's perspective, that should be fun.:twilightsmile:

Truly, I had made the right choice in choosing its bearer.

I don't think Celestia chose them...:trollestia:

That was beautiful.

You've probably heard this a lot, but you're really good at characterizing Pinkie! That was really good, all in all. I love character stories like that.

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I've always thought that, whilst the Elements choose their own Bearers, Celestia might have manipulated things a little, to nudge conditions so ponies she thought would be perfect for the position were there when needed. I mean, it is a really big coincidence that all six Bearers lived in the same town, in walking distance of the ruins where the Elements were hidden, isn't it?

I wouldn't be surprised if Celestia had been nudging certain bloodlines over the thousand years of her sister's imprisonment to make it more likely that a proper Bearer would be around when the time came. Heck, it's probably why she sent the Apple Family out to found Ponyville where they did.

That was quite simply,, literally and just: lovely to read.

Have you considered writing the other one-on-one meetings Celestia mentioned with: Rarity, Fluttershy, Applejack and Rainbow Dash yet? I for one would jump on board that bandwagon in an instant after this.

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