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BronyWriter


I write pony words. Millions of them. Some people actually think they might be worth reading. I am very thankful for that. Also, I have a Patreon now?

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TD Harrison Powell, the human first seen in No, I am NOT a Brony, GET ME OUTTA EQUESTRIA!!! is drafted by Fluttershy to go into the Everfree Forest after one of her missing chickens. Little does he know that what he finds there will change him forever...

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 341 )

Are you sure this is complete? I think it could use at least one more chapter.

*crosses fingers* please let spiderstitch be in it :pinkiecrazy:

Thanks you for remembering me why ponification is actually creepy :twilightoops:

3426705 Yeah, accident. If you check the author's note, you'll see that I confirmed another one.

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I did not read that at first, I just downloaded the txt file.:rainbowlaugh:
Lookin' forward to the next one.

JBL

Not to be ruse

rude

You chickens go

Your

Also, how dark is this going to be? Anywhere near Breaking of a Non-Brony ?

Pretty good, I like how the mood is slowly warping and twisting. Five stars, quite spooky.

I am enjoying this, I can't wait to see how this plays out. (I am rooting for the malicious intent. Merely because in a "Scary" or "halloween" themed thing, I don't think they play out well with a happy ending. But I can't wait to see how you pull this off.)

poison joke calling it now

3427075 the use of itchy automaticly reminds me of that diary and the entries within so yes itchy tasty zombie TD :pinkiehappy:

Fluttershy vigorously nodded. "It is! I promise it is! Abbywing got out through a hole in the chicken coop and ran out into the Everfree Forest! I have to get her before something happens, but it's dangerous to go alone!"

Must....resist......aw F*CK IT! leelaughead.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/05/zelda_dangerous.png

I REGRET NOTHING!!!!

I really like the story! But DON'T LET TD DIE!!!! PLEASE! I don't care if you do anything else to him. Just don't let him die!!!!!:flutterrage::fluttercry:


please?

TEASER?! FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!

I get that your putting out a "Horror" story for halloween, but if this will be continued, I fail to see how it will be "Dark."

Unless it ends up being a Mutated hybrid monster TD, like in the Fly, who ends up killing ponies.

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If this is just a Ponyfication story, how do you plan on making it dark?

3427991 I said in my blog announcing it that it would be like Cronenberg. So yes, The Fly. Sort of. Obviously not quite the same.

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AGREEEEEEED! AGREEEED!
Now, in the words of- oh damn this!
MOAR TD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Hell no. If this is following Cronenberg, especially The Fly, TD had better die.

As much as I love your work BronyWriter, TD somewhat pisses me off. You've put him through hell in some of your stories, stripping him of his family, home, turning him into a hybrid and even stripping him entirely of his species and gender AND HE'S STILL HANGING OUT HAPPILY WITH THE PONIES!

I need a tragic ending for this guy.

I'm sorry if it sounds like I'm trying to pressure you. TD just really frustrates me.

3428068 Just... trust that I know what I'm doing with this one.

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Hmm. This chapter changes things. He isn't just changing physically, but his whole mentality is changing as well. If he turns, he won't care to change back.

Unless, instead of physically mangled monster, he goes insane from 2 sets of memories and personalities.

I'll see where you go with this. I'll probably love it, even if it ends up having a *shudder* happy ending.

Actually, a happy ending could be acceptable if done properly.

And by properly, I mean turning TD into a pony. That's pretty horrifying. Not only does his body change, but he loses everything that makes him him.

Oh no, it's getting worse. I hope TD gets a cure in time.

I humbly request more at the fastest pace convenient to you.

Oh god... TD.

Damnit! Damnit all to hell!

Why must everyone be denied their happy ending?

Is this going to be a story of the blanks type TD story?

Is this canon with any of the other TD stories?

it would be weird if TD just unzips a zipper and his normal human self steps out and yells SURPRISE! at twilight.:pinkiecrazy: somewhat like this near the end

Holy shit...
...
Was...was TD being, ugh, respectful of Celestia?:rainbowderp:
This is bad. This is beyond bad.

Fix him Twilight! Use magic, or science, or something! Just bring back the old TD before he does something that he'll regret, like not punching Celestia in the face when he learns that this is somehow her fault.

3428295No normal science won't help, she needs...... APERATURE SCIENCE INNOVATORS!! to help!

You know, this is a bit more tense for since I just watched the movie VHS

3428387 That one was hit-and-miss for me, but it had some good ones.

Fascinating! Gotta ask: when do you think you will come out with the next chapter? No rush, just eager.

As someoen who can't tell what movie this is based off, I'm really curious to how this is all gonna end.

3428456 It's not specifically based off of anything.

Dear god, TD is turning into a New Foal.:rainbowderp:

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Have you read 'Breaking of a Non Brony?' That's got the sort of thing you're looking for.

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Really? Then what's he talking about when he says he's 'turning into a pony again' in chapter 1?

"I think I'm turning into a pony again."

Since the only story with him turning into a pony is the Alicorn Princess one.
Or was that meant as the first, sign, of his changing mind?

She's my princess, and I want to show her proper respect.

You know things are going horribly wrong when....

It's funny that I find this fic in the feature box and read it right after I finish watching JonTron's Ghostbumps Halloween Special.

TD's a ghost, Twilight's a ghost, Everypony's ghosts!

Oh! His wet pants from yesterday. The strange liquid should be soaked into those! Twilight could analyze that. Seeing a possible happy end makes it more suspenseful to me.

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