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A Miscalculation Gone Cute. - Night--Mist



Rainbow Dash and Lightning Dust spend as day with Spitfire and something happens they didn't plan for, but aren't too mad about.

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Scootaoops and a Big Change

It had been about a day after the pegasus family found out about Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy becoming foalified. Scootaloo woke up and just as she suspected, her night protection was wet, and all because of her nightmare. She could already hear her little sisters crying, wanting their new mom or dad to either hold them, change them, feed them, or all three. Even though Scootaloo was used to calling Spitfire and Soarin her mom and dad now, she was still feeling a bit of a barrier between them. Sure they were trying to make her feel as welcome as possible, but there just seemed to be something in the back of her mind that was preventing the full on accepting of being part of the family.

For Rainbow Dash and Lightning Dust, it was a lot easier. It might have been due to their foal minds taking over more and more each day, but Spitfire felt that having them nurse from her was a big player in the whole ordeal. Even Kind Heart and Mrs. Cake said that it was something that brought a special connection between mother and foal. Soon Spitfire came into her room as Saorin took the foals downstairs to play. "Hey there Scootsy. How are you feeling this morning?"

Scootaloo sighed, "I had a nightmare again. I keep dreaming that you would abandon me and be returned to the orphanage and I'd get punished for nothing again. I don't want them to hurt me again."

Scootaloo started crying as she thought about the caretakers hurting her again. Spitfire pulled her close and hugged her. "Shhh, it's okay. You know your dad and I would never send you back. What they did to you and every other filly and colt there can't be undone, but it cannot be forgiven either. We love Scootsy, and that will never stop."

Scootaloo nuzzled her back, but the memories of the orphanage still gave her doubts she wouldn't go back. "Now, let's get you out of your night pull-up and get a nice bath," Spitfire said as she carried her still sleepy daughter into the bathroom across the hall.

Scootaloo would have usually asked not to be treated like a baby, but this morning, she was just so tired, she didn't care. After Spitfire took off her pull-up and set her in the tub, she began to put shampoo in Scootaloo's mane. The tub was so warm, Scootaloo remained relaxed and let Spitfire clean her this time. Spitfire was surprise, since Scootaloo usually would want to do it herself, but she didn't mind. "So, what do you want to do since school's still out for the week?" Spitfire asked.

Scootaloo was not sure. Ms. Cheerilee had said that the school would be closed until further notice since there was a gas leak in the ventilation system that was toxic. Scootaloo thought about crusading today, but then again, she didn't want to abandon her sisters. She was still surprised to find out Fluttershy was a baby again and Pinkie Pie was now in Mrs. Cake's tummy. Spitfire and Soarin had already made plans to visit the Apple family and Rarity today. They were visiting the Apple family, for it seemed to be rumored that Granny had taken some years off of her look. The reason for seeing Rarity was, well, word spread of her parents' treason against the pony sisters, and they felt she needed all the support she could get.

"Well, I don't know, I mean I could go crusading, but Rainbow and Lightning probably want me to play with them again," Scootaloo yawned.

"Well, why don't you do both. You can play with them while you're crusading. Just nothing dangerous okay?" Spitfire pleaded.

"Okay," Scootaloo said.

Soon the bath was over and Scootaloo soon walked downstairs, still feeling sleepy. Once she got to the kitchen, Soarin saw his daughter's tired state and said, "Someone is a tired little filly this morning," Soarin said.

Scootaloo yawned, "I don't know why."

"Hmm, maybe one of our light wonderbolt made energy drinks, not that store stuff, might wake you up," Spitfire said as she walked into the living room to nurse her youngest daughters.

"I actually made a mix that is young filly and colt age appropriate," Soarin said.

"Where is it?" Scootaloo asked.

"Should be in the fridge right now," Soarin said.

Scootaloo trotted over to the fridge and opened the door. She then saw an orange vile. "Is it this orange soda looking one?" Scootaloo said.

Soarin thought she said, "Is it next to the orange soda looking one?" and replied, "Yeah it should be..." he stopped in mid-sentence, realizing what she had said.

By the time he turned around Scoots was already taking a sip and he yell, "Scoots, wait!"

But it was too late she took a big gulp and stood there and said, "What is it da..."

Her sentence was cut short as she dropped to the ground, grasping her belly and the vile somehow staying in tact and up right after she let it go. Soarin rushed to his eldest daughter before she was engulfed in the same bright light Rainbow and Lighting had days prior.

Meanwhile in the living room, Spitfire's attention snapped to the direction of the kitchen as she saw a bright flash come from there. "Soarin? Did what I think happened, happen?... Soarin?" Spitfire asked with a bit of panic in her tone.

Soarin came trotting in with his wings folded in a bowl. "Soarin, where is Scootaloo?" Spitfire demanded as Lightning and Rainbow's attention turned away from their meal.

Soarin, with an apologetic look on his face, lifted his right wing to reveal a very tiny, and very cute, sleeping foal with orange fur, cute little wings, and a distinct purple mane. It couldn't be more then a week old. "Soarin, is that?..." Spitfire asked in disbelief.

Soarin nodded, "She drank the potion before I could stop her."

Spitfire sighed, knowing it wasn't on purpose, and that it was more her fault then his that Scootaloo had unknowingly drank the potion. Still, it did provide a cute result.

Rainbow Dash and Lightning Dust were in shock and daww. Their big sister was now their little sister... again, at least for Rainbow Dash. Rainbow crawled towards her as Soarin placed her gently in Spitfire's forehooves, while he went to get a 'one size fits all foals' diaper, just in case of emergencies, like this one. She leaned in and nuzzled her sleeping sister and smiled as she and Lightning watched her sleep. Scootaloo cutely snored in her sleep making nothing but baby gibberish.

"I don't think your gonna be going to school any time soon, my littlest one," Spitfire said as she gently brought her head down and nuzzled her little Scootaloo.

Soarin soon came down with the diaper along with a spare pacifier, ointment, and baby powder. After applying everything, Scootaloo was now in a snug little diaper and curled up into her mother's chest. "Good thing I brought that third baby carrier along. I thought we might need it in case of having to watch Fluttershy for Kind Heart, but looks like somepony else gets to use it now," Soarin said.

"You do like to be prepared for the unexpected, don't you honey," Spitfire said.

"Well, can't blame me for that can you?" Soarin said.

"I guess not. But I think we're gonna need to take that potion to Zecora or Twilight for safe keeping. I don't want another accident like the one that just happened," Spitfire said.

"You and me both honey," Soarin said.

Spitfire then felt a certain somepony stir between her forelegs and looked down. She came to see Scootaloo rubbing her little eyes and then looking up at her. She then gave Spitfire a toothless smile. "Awwww," Rainbow and Lightning sang in unison. "Hello my little Scootsy," Spitfire said as she lowered her muzzle down to tickle her youngest daughter. Scootaloo giggled before grabbing Spitfire's muzzle and nuzzling her giving her a small lick. "So you wanna go see Fluttershy sweetie," Spitfire asked.

Scootaloo tilted her head, not remembering anything before just now. "Oh sweet Celestia, um, I think the potion may have affected her more then it did Rainbow and Lightning. From how much she drank she doesn't seem to remember anypony," Spitfire said.

"Is that bad?" Soarin asked.

"Yes and no. Yes, because she won't remember her friends, and no, because this may rid her of the nightmares she's been having about the orphanage," Spitfire said.

"I see, well, none the less, we have to inform everypony who needs to know, about this, the only thing that's getting to me though is who can we trust to keep this secret?" Soarin said.

"Rainbow's and Scootaloo's friends and their friends' reletives for sure, the Cakes included. We also need to let the Princesses know. If we don't we might fare no better then Rarity's parents did," Spitfire said.

Rainbow started to tear up. "No, mama and dada not go to prison," Rainbow said.

Lightning said, "We not want wose pawents."

"Don't worry little ones, Mama and Dada are not going to prison. But your mother is right. We should gather all of Rainbow's friends, foal and adult alike and bring them to the princesses. I know that they will understand what's going on, and will do their best to make sure this doesn't get blown out of proportion," Soarin said.

They then heard a huge rumbling like distant thunder. Scootaloo covered her face with her tiny hooves as she giggled. "We'll do that after this little cutie has had her tummy filled," Spitfire giggled.

Spitfire soon lifted her littlest daughter by the scruff and placed her near her teats. Like with Rainbow and Lightning, she placed a wing over her little Scootaloo as she nursed and made happy little whimpers. Once she was finished. Spitfire gave her a quick burp and soon placed all three of her daughters in their foal carriers, Scootaloo in the middle so she could feel safe between her older sisters. Once they had everything in order, the Wonderbolts family flew off and down towards the town of Ponyville.

When they landed, they were met with an unexpected sight. Topaz, the very mare who had tortured Scootaloo was running as if trying to get away from something. "You!" Topaz eyeballed Spitfire and continued, "You brought them upon us. How dare you!"

"Excuse me, but, what are you talking about?" Spitfire asked dumbfound.

"Don't act like you don't know. You had the mayor inspect us and the police barged in like it was no pony's business, and start to drag us out. I hope your happy, your act made headline news here," Topaz said.

Before the could utter another word, the police tackled her and told her of her rights. As they dragged her off she yelled, "Because of you, the children will not receive the punishment they deserve! No pony will be able to adopt a well behaved child!"

Soon, she was out of sight as they towed her off in a jail wagon. "Well, that was unexpected, but I never even spoke with the mayor about inspecting them. Who in Equestria outed the caretakers first?" Spitfire asked.

Then a newspaper blew into her face. It's headline read:

A Town Hero: Anonymous Pony Strikes Down Orphanage Oppressors.

After seeing the daily struggles of the fillies and colts while undercover as a fellow caretaker, a mystery pony releases story to press and alerts the Mayor of Ponyville. Mayor does surprise inspection and takes swift action to have all caretakers arrested and brought in for questioning. Orphanage is now under new, kinder, and closely watched management. No news on whether this will affect other orphanages in surrounding towns or further.

"Well, very effective to go undercover. Wish I could have done that, though, I am too easily recognized. I wish I knew who the pony was so I could thank them," Spitfire said.

"I'm sure whoever did it knows you are thankful along with the fillies and colts of that place," Soarin said.

"Don't let find out your the mystery pony," Spitfire said.

"I wish I was, but sorry," Soarin said.

"We go see Wawity now mama?" Rainbow Dash asked.

"Of course Rainbow. That mare will need out support and this news will probably be music to her ears," Spitfire said.

"Yes, and AJ will be more then pleased to know other fillies and colts her little sister's age are gonna be in good hooves now," Soarin said.

The pegasus family soon made their way to Rarity's boutique, unaware of the surprise in store for them.

Author's Note:

End of Story. I know I said I would make more chapters for this story, and I'm sorry for those who want this to continue, but the rest will continue in my story that is a sequel to this story and the stories that are connected to this one. Stay tuned. I will make the new story when I can. Don't loose faith in me yet.

Comments ( 62 )

Its good that your getting back to your stories man and I liked this chapter but I really didn't see it necessary to regress Scootaloo, I'm just nick picking but I think you could have done something else for Scootaloo to get over her fear of the orphanage but other then that good job.

4112823 It wasn't so much to help her rid of the fear of the orphanage, it was something else, and I am sure you can guess what it is.

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If it's to connect her with Spitfire and Soarin more you could have done something else also I will admit regression is more fun then any other solution and so cute too.:rainbowkiss:

4112837 That's not it either, but it is a bonus along with getting over the fear of the orphanage.

Well I haven't read all of your stories, but after this chapter I do know one thing

D'aawww Rainbow , Lightning and Scoot are so cute lol I can't wait to read more although I didn't expect Scoot to become a baby again lol

4113004 Be sure to watch out for my story that combines all the mane sixes regression stories into one.

4113018 of course that sounds so freaking cute!!

I honestly didn't think scoots would become a foal. That was a big surprise for me:pinkiegasp:

... Well, I kinda had a hunch when it talked about her wanting the bond rainbow and lightning had with spitefire:twilightsheepish:

I still loved this and can't wait to see all their reactions when they learn about rarity and sweetie belle..

You know, apple bloom should become a foal too, since her two best friends are foals now and she'd be all alone in her age group unless babs comes to stay permanently

4113168 I don't know if I'll have Babs in this story series, I am still thinking about it though.

Aw, and yet another regression provides a cutie. :rainbowkiss:

4113018 So it's all coming together now. It's kind of like my Foals Of Harmony story but every pony takes a different regression at different times and then they mash them all together.

4113173 question: will the sequel ID the pony who spilled the proverbial beans about the corrupt caretakers? I certainly hope so or at the very least give a hint.

4113173 by the way I forgot to mention I really do enjoy your foalification stories. :)

Comment posted by Life Haunter deleted Apr 6th, 2014

Damn orphanages pissing me off... I know how it feels cause I was one

*sigh* I'm sorry but I have to be honest here. Don't get me wrong this is a good story but I have some questions about the last chapter.

1. Don't you think it was irresponsible of Spitfire and/or Soarin to leave the potion in the fridge being mistaken as soda?

and 2. I think the ending would have been better without scootaloo being fully regressed. Not to disappoint and again this is a good story. But what about the memories she has with her friends and Rainbow Dash?

all in all I give the story a 3/5 for good story and decent care. I'm a little disappointed about the last chapter but I'm sure i'm going get a lot of comments if I made some others mad.
Emotions::raritystarry::twilightblush::fluttershysad::heart:

It had been about a day after the pegasus family found out about Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy becoming foalified.

Um... Maybe I've (finally) gone insane, but I could have sworn it was Dashie and Dusty that had regressed, not PP and Flutters. Still, fun story if a little unusual. I like it!

4472704 There are other stories that are connected to this. That's is how they found out. Read Always Clam is Flutters Mom and Pinkie Pie Cake, and you'll understand, this was my first story in a series.

4473810
Okay, thanks for clearing that up! I was starting to think I had legitimately gone crazy...

please update soon, this story is really cute

Please update. You are doing great. At lest Scoots does not have to have any more night mares about her past.

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Umm, you do realize this particular story is finished right. Status is complete, it's part of a series, and other stories like this are complete as well. if you want to read up on my other arcs in the series, click on my userpage and look for "Always Calm is Flutters Mom, Pinkie Pie Cake, Even the Littlest Apple Makes a Difference, A New Style for the Most Fashionable Pony, The Royal Crystal Family, and my latest installment in the series, My Little Foals: Friendship is Padded.

All but the last story I mentioned are complete as well, so stand by for updates on "My Little Foals: Friendship is Padded".

5559377 Thanks. I honestly didn't know since there was no spelling error. I think I used the wrong vile, er, vial.

6777454 Pretty much means "You got me there".

7265785 Read on to the last chapter, and you'll find out what happens.

Please let there be a sequel someday (hint hint):moustache:

Wow, well done.

Wait
Is a chapter missing?

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Not sure I follow. What do you mean?

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Oh, you need to read the other stories I guess
It’s just the ‘now that they learned that pinkie and fluttershy are babies too’ part

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Ah yes, this story is part of a series. My Little Foals: Friendship is Padded is the one I am currently working on.

8963310
Yeah, is there one story where all the chapters are in chronological order from every story?

8963495
All this story jumping is starting to hurt my tiny fox hea- *makes a tiny fox squeak* O-o uhh
Guess I’m starting to turn into a Fox again, gotta go!

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Aww, bummer.

Luna: Nighty! You get back here and take your bath!

Me: EEEP!!! Gots to goes. *Gallops away in padded flank.* (By the way, I self-included myself and a few others into my series here.)

*squeakedy squeak-squeak*
*Translation activated*
I’ve read a lot and I love them, expecially ones where Luna is a mom

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*makes a wheezing sound, sneezes and squeaks*
*translation actiated*
*laughing and sneezes* I’m making my oc description if you want to add me somewhere btw

Comment posted by The-Hidden-Fox deleted Jun 3rd, 2018

8963606
Ok, I’m good, my description is now up on my page in blogs

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And I don’t talk in squeaks!

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