If your reading this letter then I'm already dead. You may also recognize my body as the one that killed the element bearer of laughter, if that mare really was her. However before you pass judgement on me and label me a killer or monster, read this letter as it will show you my side of thing. It was my fault that that mare died, but I didn't want any of it to happen.
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Big thanks to TheExhaustedBrony, and Timps for spotting my spelling errors XD. Also a thanks to Mr101, Berry Punch for pre-reading as well.
One-Shotober Story #10 10/15/2013
UPDATE: Dizzy Dan has done an audio reading of the story Here.
Chapters (1)
finally found me
needs a space there
Not too bad, but some of the grammar is off, and it seemed a little rushed (especially at the end).
A few grammar mistakes, but the idea is touching
This is intresting.
I want more.
This was an awesome story! I think that Pinkie liquifying was a little extreme though. I was expecting her to have a mental break or something. But other then that and a few simple grammar/format mistakes this story was awesome! I Think that the pacing was perfect and the concept was both original and well...Awesome! I really like it when an author managed so write a spectacular fic with such a small amounts of words. This is just proof that word count doesn't matter, only what is in the story. And again, I tip my hat to you man/woman.
~ Michael
wut.
In other words, I liked it. In the short time we had, we felt bad for the guy. And we didn't even know his name!
My only problem would be Pinkie's "liquification" death. Another person in the comments mentioned a mental snap. I would say that had been better.
3352948 So, we meet again. Hi, it's been a really long time since I last saw you. How have you been doing?
7105721
Jeez, it's been so long since I read this story.
Been doing good.
7105748 Good. So, been working on anything lately?
7105748 Cool. So, done anything interesting lately?
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We should move this to PM.
This was not a very good story. I hope I never read it again.