Samuel Trenski, a Keyblade master, charged with freeing the universe from darkness finds himself in equestria where something in lurking in the shadow, something that can inflict a fate worse than death. Sam along with the mane six must working together to rid equestria of this dark entity. This is a Kingdom hearts crossover I will be introducing other KH characters later in the story.
this story is awesome i will definitely track this
284130 thanks! If you any suggestions or ideas I would love to hear them
284246
what if he teleport to a manticore and get saved by Big Mac or Zecora?
(it would be fun)
284437 I think I might do that having him become friends with either of them would be a good way to make the girls not hate him thanks a lot!
284497
if you want other ideas tell me
284437
WHY DOES EVERYONE SAY "Zacora"
ITS "Zecora"
E! NOT A!
different day, still awesome
ok I like the idea and all (in fact I just faved this story) but it is a little rushed, maybe provide a little more detail into the backstory, oh and when someone new is talking be sure to start a new paragragh
Example:
"Hi my name is Johny" Said Johny
"Hi Johny my name is Lisa" Lisa responded
End example
I hope this helps ^^ and be sure to keep up the good work.
FIRST POST BITCHES HELL YEA