• Member Since 3rd Mar, 2012
  • offline last seen Oct 14th, 2012

Samski13


T

Samuel Trenski, a Keyblade master, charged with freeing the universe from darkness finds himself in equestria where something in lurking in the shadow, something that can inflict a fate worse than death. Sam along with the mane six must working together to rid equestria of this dark entity. This is a Kingdom hearts crossover I will be introducing other KH characters later in the story.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 9 )

this story is awesome i will definitely track this :pinkiehappy:

284130 thanks! If you any suggestions or ideas I would love to hear them :pinkiehappy:

284246

what if he teleport to a manticore and get saved by Big Mac or Zecora? :twilightblush:

(it would be fun)

284437 I think I might do that having him become friends with either of them would be a good way to make the girls not hate him thanks a lot! :pinkiehappy:

284437
WHY DOES EVERYONE SAY "Zacora"
ITS "Zecora"
E! NOT A!

different day, still awesome:pinkiehappy:

ok I like the idea and all (in fact I just faved this story) but it is a little rushed, maybe provide a little more detail into the backstory, oh and when someone new is talking be sure to start a new paragragh
Example:

"Hi my name is Johny" Said Johny

"Hi Johny my name is Lisa" Lisa responded

End example

I hope this helps ^^ and be sure to keep up the good work.

Login or register to comment