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A "Naruto" crossover. Rather then dying at his brother's hands Itachi is instead sent to a world wholly unfamiliar to him, will he finally find peace within himself among the ponies of Equestria?

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 176 )

The premise isn't terrible at first glance, but the manner in which Itachi actually reaches Equestria is . . . unbelievable, in a bad way. There is absolutely no reason why Madara would want to send Itachi to a whole other world.
Spelling and grammar also need some work.

I love these! They always leave me wanting the next one!

Hmm...Itachi and pony.Are you on drugs

Wy is Itachi taking this so well?

Sweet Celestia, I just can't stop reading this! :pinkiecrazy: I'll admit that I was a little confused when I first stumbled upon the description of this story but you have managed to spin a convincing crossover. I look forward to reading more about this! :pinkiehappy: Also, Itachi/Luna for the win. :yay:

Cool another Naruto Fanfic, I'm working on one myself, feel free to check it out :raritywink:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/897/The-Tale-of-KyuubiDash

i haven't really watched naruto this makes me wanna watch it to understand half the stuff that's going on lol but other than that i like this story

Is this the last chapter? The way you wrote it made it look that way.

this was finished ages ago and only barely has it popped up? its good btw very good, i wonder why EqD took it off though when it got on

@DS no it isnt the last, this fic is finished and i dont know why they havent put the rest of the chapters

I like the story so far. I'm not sure if I like ItachixLuna shipping.
Oh well. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I completely forgot that you put these on here. I recently came to the site, and when I noticed this I was pleasantly surprised. Sorry you didn't get on Equestria Daily. You really deserved to be on there, but the people don't care for this kind of topic. Maybe next time. Last, but certainly not least, this is a wonderful story and I am honored that I was able to follow it as you came out with it on ponychan. Keep writing my friend.

" I am going to crush you, and throw you into the wind."

Best use of a Dragon Ball reference ever.

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thanks! you might be the first person to ever catch that, or at least you're the first to mention it. :pinkiehappy:

I'm glad that i found that story, it was definitely NOT waste of time! :twilightsmile: When halfway through the last chapter, when Itachi died, i was thinking it's gonna be sad ending, but later I was proved wrong (Was a bit suprised... :ajsmug:)! I REALLY hope you write more of this story, or at least sequel, because I'm curious, what happens next! :pinkiehappy: As DrahcirAloer said, keep writing, want to read whatever you write! :rainbowwild: Oh, and I think EqD lost a great story... (Maybe it's just my opinion, but I really think that!)

:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp: I just noticed it says on hiatus. That means this is going to continue!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

why am i crying... WAAAAAAA! :unsuresweetie::applecry:

:pinkiesad2:

sequel? :trixieshiftright:

42921 Yep, that's the plan. I probably will start writing again once winter break starts up in a couple weeks so be on the lookout for more chapters :twilightsmile:

was kinda skeptical at first (i mean seriously of alll thing) but it turns out it was prty well written and was prty good :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:





you have appesed pinky pie

OMG THIS STORY IS SPECTACULAR!!! SIR, U ARE A GENIUS... BRAVO MY GOOD SIR, I APPLUAD YOU!!!

5 STAR STORY RITE HERE GUYS!!!!

story was touching, though i used to read naruto mags untill i found ponies.... really good keep up with this please

i totally didn't cry when itachi died... or at the ending.... fuck you guys these be manly tears..... :raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

Lol u so stole
"Wait, was this conversation all happening inside my mind?"

"Of course it was, but that doesn't make it any less real does it?"

from harry potter:trollestia:

i'm not gunna lie this is the second time i'v read this :twilightsheepish:

cant wait for it to come of hiatus:pinkiehappy:

dear mr Bronyof Steel
that was ont of the most awsome and wonderful
stories i have ever read and (about to) re-read
the amont of joy i got from reading this is
unable to be put in to words so the words above
are a weak atempt to do so i apoligize
i look forword for more to come

Scencerly
Elijah bleu Casey
:twilightsmile:

Hey I really liked this story. Great work.

I'm surprised more people haven't read this.

The grammar is perfect, save for a couple missing commas, and the plot doesn't seems too convoluted, if you're willing to assume Madara actually can transport people through the multiverse.

I think Itachi is being a TAD to EMOTIONAL, you don't need to CAPITALIZE a word because it has EMOTIONAL weight. And the other are window dressing. They have no place in this story and I think you put the tags there to get more views.:facehoof:

Dun dun DUN!...dramatic effect. Cheesy yet a fan Favorite.

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Yep. I sense some Run-On sentences in there

So... No more Jutsu for Itachi...? :pinkiegasp:

46013 Interesting, on FanFiction.net it says complet...but it will continue you say... Good...good...

462933 Maybe, maybe not. It is Itachi, if anypony could find a way it would be him. Also, he likely still has his Sharingan.

152054 Considering his untold power with the Sharingan,plus this is a fic, sure why not? Anyway, BACK TO READING!

It has been about 22 weeks since you said it'll continue... Meh, I'm willing to wait. This story ROCKED!

I remember reading this on Fanfiction! Love it!:heart:

SHIT JUST GOT REAL!!!! AHHHHHHHHH YEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH BOOOOOOOOIIII!!!! THIS IS LIKE THE 3RD SEASON OF DAVE CHAPELLE I NEVER GOT TO WATCH. CAPS LOCKZ FTW!!!!:pinkiehappy:

Holy shit this updated? Um. I...Buh? *Reads*

1141329 I'm reminded of that ponygeist billboard that the hub did once..

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It's called Canterlock! Where you been? :rainbowlaugh:

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