After she was turned into a filly again, Nyx was unable to get off of the ground. She asked her mother for lessons, but was told that she had to wait.
Twilight is terrified of her only daughter leaving the ground and will go to any expense to keep her safe.
Will it work? Will Nyx be safe? Read and find out.
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Isnt Nyx that one ponies OC,
What was his name?
Pen Stroke or something.
This story is Poop. I shame you.
This is good stuff!! Please keep writing!!!!
OK story but where is nightmare moon? i didn't see her is she dead?
if so NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO
if not YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Cute story.
3394901 *points at Nyx* Right there. That little filly is Nightmare Moon, reborn through magic without the anger that she had with Princess Luna.
3395308
no that's nyx oc
3395674 You obviously haven't read Past Sins. I would strongly recommend you do so, seeing that this is a Recursive Fanfiction of it..
3394792 ...you so did NOT just go there, you troll!
Get out. Before I lose my temper at you for saying something like that where everyone can read it.
3395709
and loved it
as well as trunkets and winter bells so eat that
i have read it
3395995 Then you know that Nyx was an attempt to revive Nightmare Moon, but the spell was interrupted before it could be completed. In other words, she IS Nightmare Moon.
3396037
winning fight 
.
yes yes no she is a oc never in mlp has she been a pony. so i am right
3395790 I will not get out. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZOwF0TOv9pI
Just shut the f up.
3396231 *points at how she got turned into Nightmare Moon during Past Sins*
You lose.
3397575
THATS THE GAME
points at how she was created by pen stroke.
YOU LOSE
3398594 *points to how she was created from Nightmare Moon's essence*
No, I win because of a loophole.
But seriously, she is Nightmare Moon reborn. Now what do you say we stop this pointless game before we annoy everyone else.
Ummmmm
I POSTED THIS YESTERDAY
I was not expecting 17 faves, 16 comments and three WATCHES after a single day
I do not know how to react... but thanks I guess.
And I am working on a story with my own foal OC. No more mooching on the amazing Pen Stroke, this is completely mine.
Again, thank you
3398809
YOU FOOL! YOU JINXED IT!
3398617 OC OC OC OC AND YOU CAN NOT WIN BECUSE TIS A LIE
3397575 shut the hell up
I am so confused
3398972 Then why is it in the group The Hero...Nightmare Moon?
if it is then someone else did it becouse I haven't done anything with the story group wise.
But sadly I have to augment my last statement about not mooching off of Pen Stroke's Nyx. She will be in my next story, but she will not be a main character she will just be Twilight's daughter, and will only interact like a child nothing else.
Plus, before I post the story I will not talk about Nyx's past so don't say anything about it.
Thank you
3398961 What did I jinx???
3399534
your story 5 dis already
I am revealing the fact that Nyx is in the story becouse I don't want you to go "Holy shit he lied. Nyx is here!" when you see her. It's all logistics.
I would never reveal anything that would spoil the story, all you know are two characters, both of them you would have learned on the first sentence of the story.
The OC I am talking about is mine, you know nothing of her back story, nor her appearance.
Hope that helped.
So this is what you wanted me to see, its not bad what you think of mines
LOL.
It is one of my other stories, but thanks none the less.
This Isn't the story I was talking about at all.
No, what I meant by comment on the story was that I am going to post it this sunday. Its titled Eclipsed.
Thanks anyway, and If you think this story was good, then just wait for my next one.
Rather interesting scenario.
3548949
True. .
I don't know why, but I see Twilight as an overprotective parent who will go to the ends of the earth to keep her children safe... wither they need it or not
Wait, so she hit the ground? If she did and she landed on her head...wouldn't her horn break? Or does that kinda thing not happen to Alicorns. But seriously, is her horn broken, because you said that pain filled her head and either she landed on her head, cracked/snapped her horn, or got whiplash from hitting Rainbowdash's back. Ugh, my own "logic" (emphasis on the quotation marks) confuses me.
"Read and find out."
That put me off. Really, that's not how you write a blurb. Make it interesting, but not cheesy.