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Pinkie Pie is and has always been random, this is an established an accepted fact by both her friends and the residents of Ponyville-so Rainbow Dash figured she’d just roll with it when Pinkie insisted that she meet her new balloon friend ‘Jacque’.

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Not bad, sort of wish it went on longer so the punch-line would of had a deeper effect. But for what it's worth, it's alright.

Huh. That was unexpected. Definitely hit the "random" part of random.

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Yeah, I kinda ran out of steam. :twilightsheepish:

But, I'll try to have my next two be longer.

I think it could have been even funnier if Dash would remember some personal touches from the friendly balloon thus making it sound like it was more real. For instance she could ahve mentioned that time where the balloon helped Dash in a prank by zapping Twilight sparkle (yay static electircity) or some such or the time he was used to do his patented flatulence noises at Rarity's house.

Using that the other friends could act like how you may miss any object that you humanize in your mind (like your car or boat). In doing so I think it would make the fact that this was a prank all along more random and could subvert a potential lesson in that people (or ponies) can care for many things even objects and that you should treat that with its due respect.

Well. That happened.

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I wasn't too sure about what I was doing at the time because I was in a daze from illness and half-awake when I wrote this.

So, I would like to apologize for its pacing and lack of substance.

Maybe Jacques should've met Brian the Balloon in the MLP MOVIE

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