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DarkParable


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In the town of Appleoosa lives an outlaw by the name of Big Red, well know for being a vicious and ruthless gunpony. Twenty notches adorn the worn handle of his pistol. Twenty one may just be the orange coated Marizona ranger with the big iron on her hip.... (Yes I'm aware, those are flanks... It dosen't sound as good saying big iron on her flanks though.)

Parable (yes me) appears as the undertaker... Just cuz I can.

Rated teen for some minor violence and language.

The credit for the cover art goes to I-AM-KNOT

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 33 )

I haven't read it yet, but the amount of memories involved with slaying raiders to that song makes me smile. It also tells me I need psychiatric help but what can ya do?

3332637 I don' own the game anymore. I'm planning on getting it back once my finances are back up to snuff though. Still I liked it even the style felt western with a touch of Mel Brooks..

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Aren't we supposed to be yelling at that guy to leave us alone, or is that only when he won't quit burning out villages down?

In any case, I'd like to know what you think of the pony-fied lyrics... That is, if you don't mind.. :fluttershysad:

3332716 Not bad at all. I'm enjoying it thus far.

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Ahem... :yay: Music is not my thing, but I'm trying to keep it right in line with the general tune of the song. This is a project I'm going to be using to unwind a little after the last chapter I put up for From the Outside In. Mauling Red, the main character in that story, as I did was painful to write but I kinda had to... Its a major plot point x_x

3332733 Wow..I just checked the description...I...I can guess that'd be hard on ya..

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Writing things like that chapter isn't all that hard for random characters, but I'm rather attached to Red. He's mildly self-insertish, which is kinda embarrassing to admit to honestly. That said, he's got a life of his own and his own personality, Makes him feel like something special to me. Having to hurt him in the name of events that will come to pass just felt wrong and painful to me.

That kinda makes me sound odd, talking about my characters like that... But I've always felt one of the aspects of a great writer is the ability to make yourself think/feel like your characters.

3332776 If I just write for a long time It stops being me and starts being what they'd do. So no I understand exactly what you mean. Trust me I do. I'm going back through and editing my first story to make sure the characters shine out on their own more. I know where my main character is headed and I don't like the scenes I've written for the stories final chapter. It will be heard breaking a characters heart in them.

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Without spoilers, just in case you're gonna go read that lol, Red had to loose something important to him to gain something else later on. Sure its not going to be completely lost, but the way in which it was taken actually lost me one of my readers I do believe.

3332796 Some stories are hard to read. I've had to step away from several stories to calm myself before soldiering on...

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Well I hope that what comes next, some Twilight badassery, will make up for what obviously disturbed my readers... The current villain is really gonna be hurting... Like... A lot... Now that's some violence I'm going to enjoy writing... :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright: Why do I feel as if by admitting that I've just admitted I have a problem?

3332813 -Motions to the post about my aforementioned fiend slaughter loving ways.-

Thumbs up if u listened to Big Iron while reading this!

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Well i had it playing while writing it, so does that count for anything?

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-Pat pat- I know da feelz

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Woot! I demand teh thumbs... Rampant gaming has made my own rather well worn. Dear gods I sound like Lyra. "Handsss......."

QUICK! Someone who's a better artist than me, draw a Sombra-fied version of Lyra!

great beginning. Hope to see more

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I'll be starting on the next chapter tonight. This was actually put up early due to insomnia. Would have gone up this evening otherwise.

I blame you! Now I want to write a Fallout Equestria fic!

3353081 Got me reminiscing about New Vegas which brought my memories of the ride that is Fallout Equestria and well damn.

3353172 Well if you do decide to write something I'm willing to co-author it with ya if you want. It'd be nice working on a collaborative effort like that.

3353225 I'll keep ya posted, but I probably not do anything. I've got a lot on my plate already.

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Mmk then. I'll work on a chapter for this either tonight or tomorrow. RL stuff got in the way over the weekend

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That's kinda because it is lol. I said as much in the description.

Sorry for the wait everypony. I got kinda busy with being a bit sick. Just got over it the other day so I figured I'd celebrate with this. Decided to alter my plan a bit and include three verses in this chapter. Should still come out to four, though now the fouth'll be more of an epilogue.

Yay its back! Also you okay?

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Been better, been worse. The next chapter will be the end of this story, though if there's enough interest I may do something of a mini series of this sort. Not sure when I'll be putting out the last chapter. Haven't felt much like writing in recent weeks. Too much going on really. Still, glad you continue to read my stuff when I'm sure there's much better works out there lol.

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