I do this just for fun -- but sometimes I take myself a little too seriously. I know life's too short, but -- you know...
When Twilight conducts experiments, the results are always spectacular, regardless of whether the experiment is a success or a failure. Her latest attempt to create a pony robot to assist with the more mundane chores around the house initially is a wondrous success, but comes with a very high price once the robot discovers a dark truth.
Things will never be the same in Equestria again when the robot discovers it can use magic to augment its other abilities.
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this story
it makes me sad, spike got hurt
oher than that, keep it up. please do't hurt spike
Good writing!
I do so wish I had the ability to... "Flow" sentences. My writing is a bit choppy.
Dissect Spike and make him into a cyborg!
I'm with Spike. This can't end well. Also, I'm wondering what Trixie is doing in Ponyville anyways.
3371193 Alternate universe. This story takes place before the end of season 3, but after magic duel. Trixie just happens to be passing through Ponyville at this point.
3371206 Oh hey, I just noticed that last tag. Never mind, carry on.
-Sees tragedy and dark tag-
-See 'gore'-
Uh oh.
3374509 Yeah, things go downhill pretty fast soon...
I can see something resembling terminator or matrix.
Twilight, You just initiated the end of all biological life in the planet
Oh my Celestia, you killed Fluttershy!
You bastard!
...damn.
Poor Rarity and Sweetie Belle!:'(
3480089 Grim/dark has its casualties.
3480166 casualties do not always mean the dead. they can be the scarred, the disfigured, the broken. and in some cases, it is crueler if the casualites live.
3375230 ok, why didn't twilight program all of the pony bots not to harm ponies? seems pretty important if you ask me.
3556691 Because she only created the first one, allowing her creation to replicate itself -- but did not program the same failsafe into the replicated copies.
These pony-bots are adorable!
......... story moves far too quickly and the ponybots have no motivation to kill anyone. this is especialyl bad because in equistria, they are pretty accepting to sapient life........... seriously gryphons, mintoarus, ponies. so long as you don't live in the everfree you ar accepted.
also there is some false drama with celestia. the caster of the spell is dead, and thus she would return because there is nothing left to sustain it.
Perhaps. Unless it was a 'banish for x amount of time' kinda thing. Then it shouldn't really require anything from the caster to keep it going.
Maybe she'll be back when Twi gets back to Ponyville.
Lord is right, it's a bit rushed, perhaps slow it down during crucial points to evoke more emotion from the readers, for example Rarity is one of my favourite characters but I only really felt a bit of 'damn shame' during her death. Just stuff to work on if you want people to feel as they read your work. Good work so far. :)
Wow, that was a ramble and half :/ My bad xD
Ok, this is injustice right here (on the part of the judges and jury). Twilight made those robots for life to be better, she didn't design them as killing machines. It was a mistake, not a deliberate effort to wipe out an entire town. I don't know why they're sentencing her to life imprisonment when that is so clear.
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Because they were trigger happy you see....... this is when when fandom still new around 2013 before the birth of EG people tend to make depressing story
As you can see ponies around this stories are sensitive the judges a dumb as rock then again since she created them of course they blame on her
Pretty good. The court scene shoulda been longer though.
He is remarkably unconcerned to learn that Fluttershy's dead.