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This was already posted on EqD early last year, but I'm adding all my old stories to FIM Fiction.

The tags make this look worse than it is. I considered rewriting this story to replace the (fairly mild) drug references with something like the show's salt licks, but I felt that would undermine Markie and Gilda's struggle so the references stay and the whole story gets the "Dark" tag and teen rating.

This was great!!!
:pinkiesmile:

Oh my god I totally thought pinkie was going to get murdered >_<

Don't play with my heart like that!

Damn Pinkie is a genius:pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

I have to agree with you. The drug references seem incredibly out of place, otherwise, it was an entertaining read, although short. :ajsmug:

:ajsmug: (slowly claps hooves, nodding in approval) This is excellent work. Amazing way you turn the tables on Gilda in a way that actually hurts her by HELPING her!!! Never saw it coming.

Damn, this is Death Note level of planning and manipulation. Which means I can really appreciate this story :heart:

damn pinkie owned her :pinkiecrazy:

I liked it! I'm not sure if it means much because I do get easily impressed, but it made me gasped and it made me cheer and anything that can make me get lost in my emotion is a fantastic story in my head. So thumbs up for you!

Awww yeah. Pinkie pie, the mastermind! :pinkiesmile:
After "A Friend In Deed", it's not so far-fetched as it might have seemed back when you wrote this...

Wonderful stry overall. I just can't quite get into the characterizations and portrayals. It 's. A really good story but the characters' personalities just don't jibe.

I sure wan't expecting that ending, but if Pinkie can twist the laws of physics, then she can twist just about anything to her advantage. Great story.

That's horrifying.

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