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Diablomuerte2


The greatest source of inspiration for the stories I write is my insane day dreams.

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(this story takes place in the EQG world, so if you aren't a fan of EQG than this fic isn't for you.)

After Twilight returned home with Spike, the portal to the other world closed up. With no random pony princess to help get a crown for, life was returning back to normal.

Rainbow Dash, being captain of all the sports team, has a lot riding on her plate already. With soccer season coming up and a personal life, can she manage the addition of an unexpected romance?


Art by: iJab

Chapters (18)
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Comments ( 174 )
Comment posted by Flowercrowns16 deleted Oct 11th, 2013

3329603 Yes I could and I shall just for you <3 :rainbowwild:

I'm definitely liking this so far... :pinkiehappy:

3329613

*Shrugs*
Don't know, Like the ship. And sounds like a Flutterdash story
:)
And I love the story By the way.

Good so far, I am going to follow this and see where it goes, keep up the good work.

3330562>>3330918 Thanks it's nice seeing some good comments with the amount of blind haters just randomly disliking.

Comment posted by MythrilMoth deleted Oct 11th, 2013

3332154 Actually I didn't delete it because I don't like legit criticism or feed back that isn't positive. I can't grow like that. I deleted your comment because you presumed I had the idea that I expected everyone to like my story, and then you bitched and moaned about nothing that I could learn from except that you are angry at the world.

I am more of an AppleDash type but this is really good work
I can't to read more :pinkiehappy:

Haha... Fabulous Five...

I'll never stop loving Sunset Shimmer. Never.

Please sir, can i have some more?

Awe! This is soooo sweet!

Rainbow Dash better not hurt Fluttershy, I will kill you if she does! D:

Haha.... Yeah.

Some people were happy for the new couple, even if they that Rainbow Dash could have done better. Some were enraged about it since they either liked Rainbow Dash, or wanted Fluttershy

They were so enraged that they wrote fanfics about their OC's getting together with either Rainbow Dash or Fluttershy. This did not make them feel better :trollestia:

Yup, Lunch before gym generally don't go together :rainbowlaugh: if ya eat a lot ya get bad stomach aches!

3348261 Oh I shall trust me. We haven't even gotten to the first soccer match of the season or the arrival of a certain antagonist after Shy's heart >.>

Holy plot development Batman

3348276 Oh yeah that's going to happen later on. Also don't say anything but

Gilda makes an appearance and isn't too happy about RD and Fluttershy being together as well

"Hey Rainbow Dash, I thought we were going to have lunch together?" Scootaloo asked while running closer to the two girls.

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Word spread like wildfire and all over school the news was in. Rainbow Dash was going out with Fluttershy. Whether it was accurate or not, it was what they believed and everybody had their opinions of it.

Reminds me of the 2012-04-21 :rainbowlaugh:

I like this story a lot. I always felt that the Equestria Girls universe is still a bit untapped as far as stories go, you good dude, have written a good one. :yay:

3356899 Why thank you for saying so :)

This has to be one of the best written EQD fics ive read so far, keep it up!

You literally put this chapter up when I was on the last paragraph of chapter 4. I lol'd

"Plus at least Rainbow Dash can't get you pregnant so that's always a plus," she joked.

Well, way to be blunt :rainbowlaugh:

This is an awesome chapter :pinkiehappy:

3369744 plot twist:
She can get her pregnant!

Pinkie and Sunset... just as friends... :pinkiesad2:
Also good work keep it up! :yay:

3369792>>3369744 Glad you all are enjoying it :)

3369790 Rainbow Dash being a shemale? :pinkiegasp: BEST PLOT TWIST EVER!!!! :pinkiehappy:

3369790 That would be a crazy plot twist XD

3369799 Wouldn't it be a great plot twist if Rainbow Dash happened to be a shemale? :rainbowlaugh:

3369806 Well sadly that won't be a plot twist in this story.


though it would be funny.

Pinkie Pie smiled and hugged Sunset. "Thank you..."

Sunset groaned. "Get off of me... and you're welcome."

such frens
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3369817 I said hypothetically, meaning that in theory, IF it were to happen, that would be a nice plot twist :rainbowlaugh:

Cool chapter. Sunset must be feeling awkward hanging with them on lunch. I still don't feel like she was truly redeemed in the movie, so we will see how that goes. Now will Dash start feeling love toward Fluttershy? Will she accept or deny them? Fun read either way. And I still hate Diamond Tiara, she will be the new villain!

Another good chapter. First off, Sunset, don't go being all evil again, it's sinful to use cakes for evil deeds! Delicious cake :trollestia:. Poor RD should have thought things through more. And the little kiss on the nose, yup that will spread rumors in high school. If I were hit on the nose, I wouldn't want someone kissing it though, it's still tender! So I wonder who wants RD and who wants Shy. I hope Dash can keep that promise of stopping others from hurting her.

Darn it, Sunset, stop being evil lol. Maybe Pinkie can save her. I just love the Applejack Rarity relationship, it is so funny and cute. And it's nice that Big Mac is supportive, yet still pokes fun at his sister. It's also nice that Fluttershy has her escape with the animals, and that Dash really does want to help. Things are going smooth so far, I would love a date helping animals, I love them!:yay:

So there is hope for Sunset Shimmer yet. Gilda is a jerk, as always. Fluttershy's mom is funny, as always. I wonder what happened in the past that she would warn Dash. I'm glad Applejack and Rarity didn't have a fall out. Poor AJ, she needs to learn to be intimate!

Ha~ha. I knew all along that Gilda would be in this one. I know EVERYTHING! Mwahahahahaha!:pinkiecrazy:

You keep on intriguing me. It's an awesome story and all, BUT, I know these kind of these stories, and if this chapter is any indication, I think a confrontation or two is upon us. This'll be fun :pinkiehappy:

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