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ThunderCracker


They're gonna mess up my FUCKING TOMATOES.

Comments ( 53 )

could turn out to be good... stick with it and good luck.

Wow what a fantastic brother letting his bro drive home drunk :rainbowhuh: great story so far though

It was pretty good. Kinda rushed though. Take your time to describe the details, and try not to fall into the "he did this. Then he did that. Then he did the other thing," trap.

being a discordian i love the idea of eris as a human, so allon-y

Her eyes freak me out a bit. Must definitely be a case of albinism and jaundice.

Interesting!:duck:
I shall look forward for the next chap!

I'll just add this story to the list of things that use my name.

Sooo its Humans.. Its Oc's.. what about this is a Mlp Fanfiction exactly? :applejackunsure:

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They do look a like though I thought he was Brad Pitt as we'll! But then my friends told me he isn't and I felt like a prat.

I'll be honest here. I'm faving this for porn. Thank you.

3332636 No they don't. They're not even from the same continent.
The Hemsworth brothers are Australian. Pitt is an American.

3335030 I don't think it's something to argue about, it was my mistake. Just leave it alone.

3335043 Well, could you please fix it. I feel very uncomfortable with a fellow Australian losing credit where it's due.:fluttershysad:

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Eris is the fannon genderflip of Discord.

I like this setup.

Good, good…we building up and thats good!:moustache:
Next chap?

I like this so far... kinda. It needs a lot of work though, I don't know much about writing but I can see this was quite rushed. I will keep my eye on it however, it looks like it has potential. Just try to put more detail into the describing part of things and try to spead it out more because everything roared by at 7000 miles per hour. Anyway, good luck and I will now read the next chapter. :twilightsmile:

I know this is early but I hope you plan on making a story to this cause dammit not enough of eris

Travis is kind of a dick. No wonder he's alone.

...And then Carline walks in on them.

6616161 You can count on that happening in the future chapters.

Oh my god, I had thought this story was kinda dead. I always like some good fu fu in the snu snu. :twilightblush:

6617403 Fu Fu in the snu snu. Lol. I'll be sure to keep that in mind for a future chapter.

Comment posted by GreenPony deleted Nov 11th, 2015

THIS SONG IS MADE FOR THIS BEATIFUL STORY!!!!:pinkiesmile:

this song goes with this story

Does eris have magic? Is she also still the goddess of strife?

6745461 I'm thinking of adding powers in the later chapters.

Why didn't I just say no and let her find a different place or just, kick her out. But whats stopping me?

If i had to guess, i would probably say DAT ASS! :moustache:

I shall read this later.

So he didn't question how did she got to his home?

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She has powers that Travis doesn't know about yet.

I found out about he update in me Feed.
Why was it not with the rest of the unread chapters of fics I favourite?

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No idea, at least you figured out about it somehow :yay:

It's all in good fun, as long as she doesn't destroy him in the end for giggles.

Okay, You had my Curiosity, Now you have my Attention- BUT Fuck... I need more- Very badly

i like the story my only issue is length i mean im not a speed reader but i finished the whole thing too this point in under 15 min. need too draw things out a bit more try too develop the charicters a bit more too. try to odraw thigns out like when they got too the casino dont have him just accept it have him make a small scene then eris pulls him aside and give some deflecting explanation then he begrudgingly gets into it. or something like that. its a good story just needs more meat persay. hope you keep going and wish you the best of luck.

This demonstration of powers was sudden.

She went from slightly quirky to straight-up 'MAGIC, BITCHES!!!' in a millisecond.

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You expected different from chaos?

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I never said anything about expectations.

I simply made an observation.

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Thank you for the feedback my friend, I'll make sure to improve on it :pinkiehappy:

*and it begins next time on Dragon ball Z*

I have the same opinion as 8361162.

I'll keep this story pinned, but I'm going to wait until there's a good amount of chapters to read, and the pacing is adjusted until I read it again.

When will this be done? It sounds/looks like it will be a good read but I refuse to read something until it is done so that I don't have to constantly wait for updates (although I guess I am doing that regardless)

i am curious as to what eris will do to him if he pises her off turn him into a pony?

... Funny...... Entertaining..... Mild amounts of emotional content.... Works, it does indeed. Not five but still, works.

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