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When Rainbow Dash forces her date Fluttershy into going into Ponyville's local graveyard at twelve o' clock on Nightmare Night, of course she is scared out of her mind! But can she even open the gate to the graveyard before screaming and running? Well, we'll see.

Sorry this might seem like a bad idea, but I needed a Halloween story to post. Read this at your own risk, as the story has a Teen rated edge. Just a little follow up to those who don't like to read "scary" things.

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The timid pony must have had a heart attack, because she dropped her jaw and started breathing heavily. The timid pony must have had a heart attack, because she dropped her jaw and started breathing heavily.

The same sentence is repeated twice here

3417555 Darnet. I'll fix that.

you mind if you add thid to the Flutterdash group or do you wanna do it yourself?

3429120 Darnet, . I'll do it. :twilightblush:

That is so like Hasbro. Someone tells Fluttershy to do something she doesn't want to, and without giving a crap about her consent, they FORCE her to do it. That was kinda the problem with that episode with the dragon. And it's the same problem here.

Nopony should take advantage of Fluttershy's non-assertiveness. NOPONY!!! :flutterrage:

3513326 Is that the only reason why you don't like this story? :trollestia:

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Not really. I also expected that after facing that timberwolf, Fluttershy would have been more in tears from that experience too.

And also game rules should have a line drawn somewhere, and I'm talking about doing something you absolutely dying to NOT do.

3513570 Well, first of all, Fluttershy, (I'm sure) has faced timber wolves before. Same with the dragon, Cockatrail thing, and plenty of other stuff that I can't remember. Second of all, I have no idea what that means. :scootangel:

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How do you think she would handle those creatures if it didn't involve protecting her friends? Much differently. If she faced the cockatrice (if I spelled that right) and the dragon alone, I bet she'd be out of there faster than a speeding bullet. Oh, and the last time she was up against timber wolves, she ran... with her friends... terrified. She was freaked out at Dash's imitation.

3513643 Smart-Alec. :trixieshiftleft: CUT ME SOME SLACK, I AM YOUNGER THAN 10 YEARS OLD AND THIS WAS MY FIRST FLUTTERDASH STORY! YES, YOU HEARD ME RIGHT, I'M YOUNGER THAN 10! :flutterrage:

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Oh..................................... okey-doke.

So much for "13 or older" when signing in for an account.

3513707 I've seen 10 and 11 year olds on this site, too. Also, I have parent permission. :derpytongue2:

You're not bad for being younger than 10, that's for sure. XD

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