Every time her negative emotions overheat, Vinyl Scratch feels a coldness creep over her...
Why can't it just leave her alone?
Dedicated to Pascal.
Pre-read and edited by Flint Sparks.
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Okay, holy shit. Vinyl's hoof in that story art is as big as her head. What in the fuck?
3814700 magic
3814705
Or radiation. That is what happens when you read Fallout: Equestria.
Damn.
Not too bad, chief.
Creepy. VERY creepy.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I hope things get better for you.
3814720 y-you too
Now I'm going to have nightmares, also hope things get better for you.
....................................
Fuckit.
Approved for Twilight's Library.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Damnit, Regi! Why'd you have to write a Vinyl story?! Now I have to read this.
*grumble grumble*
*clicks chapter, prepared for anything*
3814700
Proportions get screwed up in psychological art. Don't think about it too much.
You'll become insane like us.
God damn. This story was... something. Something powerful. Not really sure how to put into words, you know?
Reminded me of "One of My Turns" from The Wall.
And I found this vaguely reminiscent of "Breed" from Nevermind.
3814700 SHADDUP the art is beautiful
Boo.
I suspect that Vinyl's rant before the ghost appears reflects how you are feeling about your life currently.
No shit, huh?
3814973 first was intentional, second was probably created by my subconcious
3815037 yeah
3815089 I unintentionally quote song lyrics all the time when I write. Especially if its poetry. I kinda like it, actually.
3815099 there was another one in there
from "Heart Cooks Brain" by Modest Mouse
3815114 I don't listen to Modest Mouse...
3815089
*hugs you like a giant faget*
Creepy.
3815274 i suggest you fix this lifechoice error and start with the album "the lonesome crowded west"
Great song, great story. Nothing else to say really. Good luck with all the shit going on in your life.
Damn dude.
I'd be lying if I said I got it. However I did enjoy it. Which, in the end, is probably more important.
3815840 there's hardly anything to GET honestly
but I am glad you enjoyed it
Might I as if your going to submit this story in for review. If so, I'll wait to read it.
3815984 you may go and review it
3816000
And I shall.
Although this was very good, I'm not sure I caught the hidden meaning behind the story, if there even is one to begin with.
I'm kind of blunt in terms of deciphering hidden stuff in stories.
"Wake up..."
...
Scratch isn't the one being hunted, is she?
Either-way, a short but nice, creepy tale.
Not the creepiest thing I have ever read, but it was still unnerving. Good Job
This story... I feel as if I'm right on the cusp of grasping it's full significance. Even without that, I still really enjoyed it. Nice job.
Hold on...
Is the ghost... Vinyl?
3819818 spoilers~
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3819840 B-b-but that doesn't tell me anything!
On the other hand NOOOOOO VINYLLLLLLL
damn i genuinely belive that this needs a sequel
great job!
Loved it. I will definitely read more from you.
This was a rather sad story. I started out curious and now....I feel so sorry for Vinyl. I guess since you were depressed at the time it made the story show that. I hope you're ok cause of your're this good when upset you must be even better when happy. This story was sad though
3826195 heh, glad you enjoyed it
sadly I am one of those people who is better when they can pull from a sad emotion than a happy emotion
when I'm happy you just get weird little comedies and those aren't exactly very good in quality
Can't be too bad. After all I like alot of comedies cause I like to think the person had alot of fun. Plus it's gotta be better then Cupcakes....seriously I think only the writer knew why Pinkie becomes a killer in Cupcakes and they never explained it.
3826962 this is true
this is true
But honestly I didn't think a Vinyl story could be this sad and I co/pliment you on making me see what Vinyl might feel if she felt her music wasn't good enough. I would like to know if the ghost is in her mind or really there and if the ghost is trying to help or is purposely making it worst. It's hard to tell.
3827134 ahahaha
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Yeah guess we won't know till later the truth. Oh this has me excited.
This amazing story. Best work I've seen from you in some time.
3833932 thank you
3844347 hehe