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Alex Barkhorn


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Alex is a quiet, lonely, and withdrawn Senior in high school. Among others, one of his secrets is that he is a very big fan of the television series 'My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic'

One night on a walk, a miracle happens; the cast of MLP is thrown into his world, and he takes it upon himself to help him out.

But the girls, being thrown into this world, slowly come to realize that we live in an ugly, yet beautiful world filled with many goods and bads.

( Just a note, the OC is in no way shape or form associated with me or my life. He's his own character. Also, the first chapter is the only chapter that will take place without the Mane Six. Just, FYI. )

Chapters (43)
Comments ( 299 )

This is good.Can't wait for the next chapter!:pinkiehappy:

It pains me to see how little attention this is getting. It's good, seems to be around my writing skills. I'll continue reading tomorrow. Good job.

Oh no, not another Equestrian on Earth fi-
Wait.
Reading.

Dude, I love Darren Shan
This story just got 20% cooler in ten letters flat XD

Dude this is some really great stuff:yay:

Damn couldn't have finished it huh:flutter cry:

Moar moar moar moar moar:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I like it so far. Great work

Ok, story's still good. But that formatting is HORRID! You really need to bring the spaces between the paragraphs down, it just makes it ridiculously difficult to read, and there's no reason for you to be slowing the pace by doing that either (not from what I can tell anyways)

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Fixed, thanks for pointing that out. I had it saved in a notepad and didn't notice it was so spaced out.

Bro.
The girls are either going to be shunned or asked out.
I want to see one.

Now I have no option but to track this.

really great always looking forward to it
:heart:

Very nice Alex. You get oh... hmmm... 5 mustaches for your troubles=:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

I really should be going to bed, but I really wanna read this... Eh, track it for now, read it tomorrow.

Note to selves: Say no to Gridmarking!

O_O I would have reacted the very same way...

This is pure hilarity! Part of me was hoping that they were reading Skittles! :rainbowlaugh:

This was a good chapter. I look forward to more that is for sure.

383960 exactly how I would have put it.

hmmm... seems to me things are going smoothly, but we all know that never lasts for very long...

keep up the good work man!

interesting designs...
she made pony dresses.
I know.

>"Fine, I get where you're coming from. But, Alex. This is different. In Ponyville, it's all love and tolerance their."
>it's all love an tolerance their
>their
A classic mix-up sir, but I presume you were meaning to write "there"

And then they read this fic and the whole world get accidentallied

Hey chicka bum-bum
"CABOOSE, get the fuck back to our universe"

385637 my thoughts exactly

Amazing. Nuff' said. :moustache:

Stay frosty!
~Hazard~

Loving the story. Not SUPER DE DUPER EXCELLENT AMAZING... but quite good nonetheless.

I figure I'll be reading this til the end :twilightsmile:

Fitting in? That could work... maybe

401622 I can't come up with anything better.

Equestrian Club... but I don't think that quite works
New World, New Life

I dunno, I'll add any others I think of. I'm not the best at titles anyways, so...

More chapters please! :twilightsmile: This is very good and I will be following it till the end. Just saying this is one of the better dimensional crossover fics ive read. If that makes sense :twilightblush:

what about :
"Our friends"
that sound pretty good to me:pinkiehappy:

"Dreams and Nightmares of a new world", "The mundane realm" and "Six to many"....yeah i'm not the best but these are what I could think of on the spot.....

:applejackunsure:Pony Outcasts.

Magical Outcasts

And thats all I got. Sorry

409292 I think "Dreams and Nightmares of a New World" is the best so far :ajsmug:

>> SinisterPikachu Oh....really well....thank you

How about 'In his world'? I know, blatant Sonic the Hedgehog reference but it fits.

uh you do now that spaghetti has meat in it. just because they are in a human form doesn't mean they will eat meat. you don't have to change the food you can just say vegan spaghetti

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And I'm sure you're aware that there is pasta with meat sauce, and pasta with normal tomatoe sauce. Just thought you'd be able to figure that part out.
Also, the ponies aren't vegan. just vegetarian. They drink milk and eat eggs and junk. Just FYI :twilightsmile:

how about " The girls that changed my life"? nah too... long:ajbemused:

415462 (rolling eyes) vegan means don't eat meat and so does herbivore and vegetarian

What was the rest of Sweet Apple one?

hmmm how about... i got nothing that doesn't sound stupid

Technically, vegan means you not only don't eat meat, but also don't eat anything an animal produces or makes. ie, milk, eggs, etc. Vegetarians simply don't eat meat. Two large differences between the two.
To answer your question, it was Sweet Apple Massacre.

A fanfic I was gonna write is "This Brave New World"
For this you could try "New World, New Friends" or something I dunno lol

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