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Green Hills


The name's Green Hills (AKA VDH95), and welcome to my account~

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(STORY IS UNDERGOING REEDITING)
“Demonstrate to the world, there is ‘No Better Friend, No Worse Enemy’ than a U.S. Marine.”
~Gen. James Mattis


Excited for his first deployment, young marine LCpl. Kevin Brooke and his fellow squad mates of Bravo Company 2nd Battalion 1st Marines, begin their journey through the Pacific Ocean with the U.S. Navy carrier fleet. On their second day of voyage, they encounter a large floating crystal, ending in a swift and devastating battle.

After awakening in an unknown world, four ships (‘USS’ Anchorage, Princeton, Spruance & Michael Murphy) must adapt to a land filled with talking ponies while finding their way back home. However, during their stay, Queen Chrysalis rebuilds her army to take on her new enemies, and Brooke slowly unfolds the depths of a forgotten past.


NOTICE:
*Edited/Proofread by Dumbgamer999, totallynotabrony, & Groggari
*Rated for graphic violence, language, and gore
*Additional Tags: Random (occurs a few times in the story), Comedy, Dark, Thriller
*All characters (humans) in this story are fictional and are not affiliated with the U.S. military and other international militaries
*This story takes place several months after S03E02
*My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is owned by Hasbro Studios & Lauren Faust

Featured:
-November 24, 2014 -- Wow... I have no words what to say about this. Thanks so much for this achievement.

Chapters (22)
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Comments ( 236 )

3469141 I could probably help editing wise:twilightsmile: if you need. Story is amazing, I definitely say this deserves SIX moustaches (stars) :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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Thanks so much for the offer :pinkiehappy: I appreciate it. And thanks for the positive feedback :twilightsmile::raritystarry:

“Like I said, I’m giving you anything. Why?” The marine drops his legs down and leans over the table. “Because I was trained to be like that. He's NOT giving them anything. Another editing notice:twilightsmile: to help you along:twilightsmile:

Keep up the good work on this story!

I would like more pls

Oh shit, oh shit, shit, shit... He's pissed...

He is fucking pissed........

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I actually had no intentions on doing anything else since it was a short story as planned. It is up to you to decide where our SEAL goes from there. :raritywink:

Wow just finished reading another story then this updated. Guess sleep comes last

The moment Michaels is about two feet away, I immediately embrace him in a tight hug I . The eye at the end doesn't belong.:twilightblush: Sorry, I'm kinda a grammar nazi.:twilightblush::facehoof:

Also, what is a shemagh? :unsuresweetie: only stuff I know about the army is the very basics and the stuff from Call of Duty and black ops.:facehoof: I have a life...:facehoof::twilightblush::pinkiecrazy:

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Thanks. Fixed :twilightoops:

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Fixed. :twilightoops::twilightsheepish: You are correct, a shemagh is a military scarf. It can protect soldiers from sandstorms and other debris. But it has a couple of other different names as worn by Arabs.

Haha banana seed and his grandfather at the end.

Silly pinkie, always breaking the fourth wall... Wait, she mentioned the people watching,not the people reading.:twilightoops: I'm pretty sure this isn't a show or movie:twilightblush:

You've been playing Dead Pool haven't you green hills:facehoof:

Also, another great chapter:twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

... filly is a female foal, colt is a male foal

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If you read further into the story, you'll know more.

FUCKIN AY PINKY agen you do this in almost all the stores i read

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I don’t know,” Pinkie shrugs with her usual smile covering half of her face. “Something about those who are reading us.”
readin not wachin now get back to redin ya :eeyup::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

Well since there is peace now there will be war soon

“Not even the weapon you held from Michaels before you gave it back?”
“They have done some tests, but I haven’t seen the results. Shall we have a visit?” The night princess nods, and the two Royal Sisters exit the bedroom.

So we gonna get Ponies with guns now? Hmm lets see how this goes. Back on Earth, its clear that FIM exist but I wonder if anyone back home will recognize the "tiny insect-like creatures". Also, will this turn into a first contact scenario. Anyways, just keep up the great work:pinkiehappy:!

Only humans are allowed to use weaponry such as guns

CMD

How would they know how the gun works? They don't know how to take it apart or put it back together, and if they did, some parts of it you can't put back together! Oh shit, this wont end well. :rainbowderp:

Great work i hope later the ponies see the marines kick the living shit out of the changelings and are given cookies as a reward:derpytongue2:

What could Trixie possibly want with them? :trixieshiftright:

Oh damn..... why did my heart race at the end? For a moment i thought they were going to shoot

CMD

That ending :trixieshiftright: things are getting intense.
This will be interesting.

I was hoping Trixi would do something stupid at the end. But no such luck eh?

Comment posted by ShadowMere25 deleted Feb 13th, 2014

Wait, 8 stallions carrying SIXTEEN AND A HALF TONS?

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Hey, if a group of stallions can pull a train (in the episode Over a Barrel), why not pull an MV-22?

Is this the end or will there be more!?!?!?

The commanders aren't going to like it when they find out that the princess has one of their guns.

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Very unhappy, like breaking a law unhappy. The one that caused violence.

As the author of another naval story, particularly the Bismarck, I'm enjoying this even more. Any naval action soon? :D

No, "Don't Tread on Me" is one of the mottos of the American Colonists during the American Revolution

3958913 It is also the motto for the USS America, it just came originally from the Colonists.

damn..... trixie, what in the world were you thinking:rainbowderp:

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Um dude that train was mostly made out of wood and looked like candy and is smaller that our trains which are made of iron or steal and the train was on tracts if anything the mv-22 sea hawk is also on wheels but the as are easier so I agree but j don't

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